Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy like "book bookworm" and improve grammar by adding articles and plural forms correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading. Since childhood, I have enjoyed exploring different kinds of books, especially those related to shows and stories. This habit helps me learn new things and relax.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and informal. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid informal phrases like "So yeah" and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Usually, I take my coffee with me and visit the library to read books. There, I enjoy learning new things, which refreshes my mind and makes my day better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but repetitive with "used to" and lacks linking words. Try to combine sentences and add specific examples clearly. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often visited the library as a child because I loved reading. I was especially interested in children's stories, such as those about princesses and Disney characters, which I found very enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid informal language like "So yeah" and unclear phrases like "signage kids." Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to organize your answer.

Ejemplo: I am not sure about Chinese children because I was born and live in Nepal. However, I believe that in most countries, including China, children who enjoy reading often visit libraries to find books.

× Yes, I usually go to library as I love to read the books.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library as I love to read books.

In English, the definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'books' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally about books.

× I like reading different kind of books since my childhood.

✓ I have liked reading different kinds of books since my childhood.

The phrase should be 'different kinds of books' to correctly express variety. Also, 'have liked' is better to express a continuous interest from the past to present.

× I am very interested to read the books related to the show.

✓ I am very interested in reading books related to the show.

The correct preposition after 'interested' is 'in'. Also, 'reading' is the correct verb form after 'interested in'.

× Many different stories.

✓ There are many different stories.

This fragment lacks a verb and subject. Adding 'There are' completes the sentence structure.

× I go there for refreshment to read the book.

✓ I go there for refreshment and to read books.

'Refreshment' is uncountable and should be used with 'for'. Also, 'books' should be plural when speaking generally.

× So yeah, I read the books and learn some new things in the library as it makes my day very good.

✓ So yeah, I read books and learn some new things in the library as it makes my day very good.

When speaking generally, 'books' should not have 'the'.

× Since my childhood, I was interested in the stories and kids stories.

✓ Since my childhood, I have been interested in stories and children's stories.

Use present perfect tense 'have been interested' to express an interest continuing from past to present. Also, 'children's stories' is the correct possessive form.

× When I was a child it used to have many different stories like princesses and Disney princesses so.

✓ When I was a child, it used to have many different stories like princesses and Disney princesses.

A comma is needed after the introductory clause. The sentence ends abruptly; removing 'so' makes it complete.

× I don't know about signage kids 'cause I am born in Nepal, I have live in Nepal, so I know about the Nepali kids.

✓ I don't know about foreign kids because I was born in Nepal and have lived in Nepal, so I know about Nepali kids.

'Signage kids' is unclear; 'foreign kids' fits better. 'I am born' should be 'I was born'. 'I have live' should be 'I have lived'.

× They usually go as I think in every country there are library and every child of the country like to visit the library if they like to read books.

✓ They usually go, as I think in every country there are libraries and every child likes to visit the library if they like to read books.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' when speaking generally. 'Every child of the country like' should be 'every child likes' for subject-verb agreement.