Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: You need to make your answer more natural and complete. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'Makes the place so filled and you can't have.' Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say 'I don't regularly visit the Public Library because it is usually very congested, as many people want to access historical books, which makes it difficult to find a quiet spot.'

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library because it is usually very crowded. Many people come to read historical books, so it becomes difficult to find a quiet place to study.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your situation. For example, say 'I usually use the library to research historical books. However, since I don't go there often, I rely on online resources and my mobile phone to access the books I need.'

Ejemplo: I usually use the library to research historical books. However, since I don't visit it often, I prefer to search for information online using my phone.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too negative and a bit confusing. Also, avoid using strong words like 'traumatized' unless you explain clearly. Try to give a balanced answer with linking words. For example, 'Yes, I often went to the library as a child. However, it was usually very crowded and hot, which made the experience less enjoyable.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to visit the library regularly when I was a child. But it was often crowded and warm, so sometimes it was uncomfortable to stay there for long.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and could be more specific. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating 'I believe'. For example, 'I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading about nature and history, which helps them learn more about their culture.'

Ejemplo: Many Chinese children often visit the library because they enjoy reading books about nature and history, which helps them understand their culture better.

× Makes the place so filled and you can't have.

✓ It makes the place so crowded that you can't stay there comfortably.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. To correct it, add a subject ('It') and verb ('makes') to form a complete sentence. Also, 'so filled' is awkward; 'so crowded' is more natural in this context.

× The libraries often used to make researches to get access to historical books, but because I don't go to the library, I rely more on researching online or using my mobile phone to access the books I would have typically gotten in the library.

✓ People often use libraries to do research to get access to historical books, but because I don't go to the library, I rely more on researching online or using my mobile phone to access the books I would have typically gotten in the library.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'The libraries' as the subject performing the action, which is illogical. Libraries do not 'make researches'; people do. Changing the subject to 'People' corrects the pronoun and subject usage.

× As a child, I regularly visited the library that left me traumatized because it was always congested, always smelt of heat because of the population in the Public Library.

✓ As a child, I regularly visited the library, which left me traumatized because it was always congested and always smelled hot because of the crowd in the Public Library.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'which' to refer to the whole preceding clause. Also, 'smelt of heat' is unnatural; 'smelled hot' or 'felt hot' is better. 'Population' is better replaced with 'crowd' to describe people present. The sentence is corrected for clarity and natural past tense usage.