Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. Instead, I prefer to complete my assignments and read novels online, which I find more convenient.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers relevant activities but is filled with hesitations and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: When I visit the library, I usually complete my assignments and meet friends to work on projects together. Moreover, I enjoy reading novels there and sometimes print out important papers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

Ejemplo: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there were no library facilities near my home. Therefore, I preferred to complete my school tasks at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat disorganized and contains grammatical errors. Use clear topic sentences and linking words to contrast ideas. Also, avoid vague words like 'stuffs' and be more specific.

Ejemplo: I think it depends. Some Chinese kids prefer to do their tasks at home and read novels online. However, others like to visit the library to use its resources. Schools also encourage children to use libraries regularly.

× Not frequent.

✓ Not frequently.

The original sentence uses 'Not frequent' which is an adjective phrase and incomplete as a response. The adverb 'frequently' is needed to properly answer the question about how often the student goes to the library.

× I really visit the library.

✓ I don't really visit the library.

The sentence lacks negation to express the intended meaning that the student does not visit the library often. Adding 'don't' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I prefer to perform task and complete assignments and read novels and ebooks online.

✓ I prefer to perform tasks, complete assignments, and read novels and ebooks online.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural 'assignments' and the context of multiple activities. Also, commas improve clarity in the list.

× Also there is not any library nearby my place, so that's why I.

✓ Also, there is no library near my place, so that's why I don't go.

The phrase 'there is not any library' is better expressed as 'there is no library'. 'Nearby my place' should be 'near my place'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× When I visit library, I do, uh, complete my assignments.

✓ When I visit the library, I complete my assignments.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. The filler words 'uh' are removed for clarity.

× I meet my friends so that we work on projects together.

✓ I meet my friends so that we can work on projects together.

Adding 'can' clarifies the purpose of meeting friends. The original sentence is understandable but adding 'can' improves grammatical correctness.

× I read some novels, uh, books over there and sometimes I, uh, print out some papers from there.

✓ I read some novels and books over there, and sometimes I print out some papers from there.

The sentence is corrected by removing filler words and adding 'and' to connect 'novels' and 'books' properly.

× Uh, no, actually when I was scared, uh, umm, I did not go to the library.

✓ Uh, no, actually when I was a kid, I did not go to the library.

The phrase 'when I was scared' is likely a misstatement; 'when I was a kid' fits the context better. The past tense 'did not go' is correct.

× Uh, the reason behind that was because there was not, uh, that much facility.

✓ The reason behind that was because there was not much facility.

The phrase 'that much facility' is incorrect; 'much facility' is the correct form. Also, 'because' is redundant with 'the reason' but acceptable in spoken English.

× I mean, there was not any, uh, library facility nearby my home.

✓ I mean, there was no library facility near my home.

'There was not any' is better expressed as 'there was no'. 'Nearby my home' should be 'near my home'.

× So I prefer to complete my school task at home.

✓ So I prefer to complete my school tasks at home.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple assignments.

× Some of prefer to perform their task at home and they just want to read novels and do everything online and however on the other hand some prefer to visit and use the stuffs from there.

✓ Some prefer to perform their tasks at home and just want to read novels and do everything online; however, on the other hand, some prefer to visit and use the stuff from there.

'Some of prefer' is incorrect; 'Some prefer' is correct. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'Stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and does not take a plural form. The sentence is also improved with proper punctuation and conjunction usage.

× Even in school encourage children to use the libraries.

✓ Even schools encourage children to use the libraries.

The original sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'schools' as the subject corrects the sentence structure.