Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases like 'MSP genus' which confuse the listener. Try to speak more clearly and avoid unnecessary fillers like 'uh'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example.

Ejemplo: I don't go to the library very often because of my busy work schedule. However, when I was a student, I used to visit the library regularly to learn new things. I hope to visit the library more often in the future.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and some unclear phrases like 'test, updated and explain my knowledge'. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific. Also, avoid repeating filler words like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: Usually, I read various types of books in the library, such as storybooks, comics, novels, newspapers, and magazines. Moreover, because of my science background, I often read scientific books to update and deepen my knowledge.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and awkward phrasing like 'getting an interesting topic'. Try to be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a kid, I loved reading comic books, especially funny and fantastic ones. Therefore, I visited the library every week to find interesting comics to read.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and vague phrases like 'reading capacity' and 'very prone to reading'. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Avoid filler words and be more confident in your response.

Ejemplo: I'm not completely sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because reading is very popular in China. Like Bangladeshi children, they probably enjoy borrowing comic books and other interesting materials from the library.

× Not very often because of MSP genus, uh, in my work, but uh, back to the student life, uh, I used to go to the library to, uh, gain different, to gain many knowledge and, uh, which really addressed myself. And I hope that I will go to the library in the future, uh.

✓ Not very often because of MSP genus, uh, in my work, but uh, back to student life, uh, I used to go to the library to gain different kinds of knowledge, which really helped me. And I hope that I will go to the library in the future, uh.

The phrase 'to gain many knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'many'. Instead, use 'different kinds of knowledge' or 'a lot of knowledge'. Also, 'addressed myself' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'helped me' or 'benefited me'. The verb form 'to gain' is correct here, but the phrase needs correction for noun usage and clarity.

× Normally, I like to read different types of books when I visit a library, for example, story books, comic books, umm, novels, and read uh, newspapers and magazines. I believe that uh, uh, it can help me to test, updated and explain my knowledge about especially scientific topics because I have a science background and I'll have to read different types of scientific books.

✓ Normally, I like to read different types of books when I visit a library, for example, story books, comic books, novels, and read newspapers and magazines. I believe that it can help me to stay updated and expand my knowledge, especially about scientific topics because I have a science background and I have to read different types of scientific books.

The phrase 'help me to test, updated and explain my knowledge' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'help me to stay updated and expand my knowledge'. 'Test' is not appropriate here, and 'updated' should be 'stay updated' as a verb phrase. Also, 'about especially scientific topics' is awkward; 'especially about scientific topics' is better. 'I'll have to' is changed to 'I have to' to indicate habitual action.

× I remember when I was a kid actually, I loved, I loved reading different types of comic books, for example, fantastic comic books and other comedy type comic books, et cetera. So I really visited library weekly for getting an interesting topic.

✓ I remember when I was a kid, I loved reading different types of comic books, for example, fantastic comic books and other comedy-type comic books, etc. So I really visited the library weekly to find interesting topics.

The phrase 'visited library weekly for getting an interesting topic' is incorrect. It should be 'visited the library weekly to find interesting topics'. 'Visited library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'For getting' is incorrect; the infinitive 'to find' is appropriate here. 'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to match the context.

× Actually, I'm not very sure about, uh, Chinese kids, uh, reading, uh, reading capacity, but I, uh, know that Chinese people are very prone to reading, uh, new books. So most probably, umm, most of the kids go to the library, uh, to search different types of comic books like Bangladeshi people.

✓ Actually, I'm not very sure about Chinese kids' reading capacity, but I know that Chinese people are very fond of reading new books. So most probably, most of the kids go to the library to look for different types of comic books like Bangladeshi people.

The phrase 'not very sure about, uh, Chinese kids, uh, reading, uh, reading capacity' is awkward; it should be 'not very sure about Chinese kids' reading capacity' using the possessive form. 'Prone to reading' is not appropriate; 'fond of reading' is better. 'To search different types of comic books' should be 'to look for different types of comic books' as 'search' is usually followed by 'for' or replaced by 'look for'.