Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Javobingizda ortiqcha "uh" so'zlarini kamaytiring va gaplaringizni aniqroq va mantiqiyroq qiling. Masalan, har bir gapni to'liq va aniq ifoda eting, shuningdek, 'homeworks' o'rniga 'homework' so'zini ishlating. Gaplaringizni qisqa va mazmunli qiling.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library, especially this year, because I have a lot of homework. It is very convenient for me since it is close to my school. I usually study English and maths there.

Sugerencia: Javobingizni aniq va mantiqiy qilib tuzing. Gaplaringizni qisqartiring va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, nima qilishingizni aniq ayting va nima uchun qilayotganingizni tushuntiring. Grammatik xatolarni tuzating.

Ejemplo: First, I go to the library after lunch because I am usually hungry after school. Then, I use the computer club to do my mock tests. Finally, I read books or stories to improve my reading skills.

Sugerencia: Javobingizni grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri va aniq qiling. Masalan, 'didn't used to' o'rniga 'didn't use to' deb ayting. Shuningdek, fikrlaringizni mantiqiy ketma-ketlikda ifoda eting va ortiqcha "uh" so'zlarini kamaytiring.

Ejemplo: Unfortunately, when I was a kid, I didn't use to go to the library because I didn't know much about it and I was busy. Now, I regret it because the library is a great place to learn.

Sugerencia: Javobingizni aniq va mantiqiy qiling. 'Chinese kiss' o'rniga 'Chinese kids' deb to'g'ri talaffuz qiling. Shuningdek, fikrlaringizni aniq ifoda eting va mavzudan chetga chiqmaslikka harakat qiling.

Ejemplo: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but in my opinion, many of them go to the library regularly because they are hardworking. For example, they often win gold medals in the Olympics due to their dedication.

× I frequently go to the library, uh, especially this year, I, uh, sometimes go to the library because I have a lot of homeworks.

✓ I frequently go to the library, uh, especially this year, I, uh, sometimes go to the library because I have a lot of homework.

The word 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. Use 'homework' without 's' to indicate the work assigned to students.

× Uh, I do hear my English and maths classes.

✓ Uh, I do attend my English and maths classes.

The verb 'hear' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb to use with 'classes' is 'attend' or 'go to'. 'Hear' implies just listening, not participating.

× Uh, the library is too convenient for me because there are no.

✓ Uh, the library is very convenient for me because it is nearby.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'There are no' is incomplete and does not convey meaning. The sentence should clearly state why the library is convenient.

× OK first of all I go there and take a plunge because after school last night very hungry and after my having a lunch I go to the computer club.

✓ OK, first of all, I go there and take a break because after school last night I was very hungry, and after having lunch I go to the computer club.

The phrase 'take a plunge' is incorrect here; 'take a break' fits better. Also, the sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement and punctuation. 'After my having a lunch' should be 'after having lunch'.

× I'm doing here my CD mock test and after the end I reading a book or story it improve my reading.

✓ I'm doing my CD mock test here, and after that, I read a book or story to improve my reading.

The phrase 'after the end' is incorrect; 'after that' is better. 'I reading' should be 'I read' to match the present tense. 'It improve' should be 'it improves' for subject-verb agreement.

× Unfortunately, when I was a kid, I didn't used to go to the library.

✓ Unfortunately, when I was a kid, I didn't use to go to the library.

The correct form is 'didn't use to' (without 'd') because 'did' already indicates past tense, so 'use' remains in base form.

× I regret about it because I don't have any time.

✓ I regret it because I didn't have any time.

The verb 'regret' is not followed by 'about'. Also, the tense should be past 'didn't have' to match the past context.

× Additionally, I didn't know, I didn't have any idea about library.

✓ Additionally, I didn't know; I didn't have any idea about the library.

Add 'the' before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. Also, punctuation improved for clarity.

× Uh, I am too regretting right now because library is the best place for me then.

✓ Uh, I am regretting it a lot right now because the library is the best place for me.

'Regretting' is a stative verb and usually not used in continuous form; however, 'I am regretting' can be acceptable in informal speech. Added 'it' after 'regretting'. Added 'the' before 'library'. Removed 'then' as it is unclear here.

× I don't have any information about Chinese kiss, but I think since my in from my opinion, I think they go every day because they are really smart.

✓ I don't have any information about Chinese kids, but in my opinion, I think they go every day because they are really smart.

'Kiss' is a typo; it should be 'kids'. Removed redundant phrases 'since my in from my opinion' and replaced with 'in my opinion'.

× In every Olympics they win first place gold medal and they're too smart.

✓ In every Olympics, they win the gold medal for first place, and they are very smart.

Added commas for clarity. 'First place gold medal' is better expressed as 'the gold medal for first place'. 'They're too smart' is informal; 'they are very smart' is clearer.