Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to use complete sentences and correct prepositions, for example, say 'I go to the library every Sunday and on public holidays.' Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I go to the library every Sunday and on public holidays. It is close to my house, just a five-minute walk away, and I usually spend one to two hours there.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your activities. For example, say 'I usually read literature and newspapers because the library provides a calm environment where I can focus without distractions. Additionally, I prepare for competitive exams there.'

Ejemplo: I usually read literature and newspapers because the library provides a calm environment where I can focus without distractions. Additionally, I prepare for competitive exams there.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use past tense correctly and improve sentence flow. For example, say 'Yes, I started going to the library when I was 14 and in high school. Since then, I have been going regularly. Sometimes, I go with my friends, and we study peacefully there.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I started going to the library when I was 14 and in high school. Since then, I have been going regularly. Sometimes, I go with my friends, and we study peacefully there.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons. For example, say 'Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are keen to study and gain knowledge. I have seen many children visiting the library regularly to study or do their homework.'

Ejemplo: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are keen to study and gain knowledge. I have seen many children visiting the library regularly to study or do their homework.

× Yes, I go to library on every Sunday and any public holidays.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every Sunday and on any public holidays.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'on' is needed before days and public holidays for correct preposition usage.

× Also try to spend one to two hours in a library which is nearby my house within 5 minutes walking distance.

✓ I also try to spend one to two hours in a library which is nearby my house within a 5-minute walking distance.

The sentence lacks a subject 'I' at the beginning. Also, '5 minutes walking distance' should be 'a 5-minute walking distance' to correctly use quantifiers and adjective forms.

× I study a some literature, book some newspaper, uh, this place give me a environment where I can focus on element calm without distraction.

✓ I study some literature, read some newspapers; this place gives me an environment where I can focus calmly without distraction.

'a some' is incorrect; 'some' alone is sufficient. 'book some newspaper' is incorrect; 'read some newspapers' is appropriate. 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'this place'. 'a environment' should be 'an environment' because 'environment' starts with a vowel sound. 'focus on element calm' is incorrect; 'focus calmly' is the correct adverb form.

× I also prepare for competitive exam, uh, in that.

✓ I also prepared for competitive exams there.

The question is about past activities, so past tense 'prepared' is appropriate. 'competitive exam' should be plural 'competitive exams' for general meaning. 'in that' is unclear; 'there' is better to indicate the place.

× Yes, I am from age of 14 when I was in high school.

✓ Yes, I have been going since the age of 14 when I was in high school.

The original sentence is ungrammatical. To express starting an activity at a certain age continuing to present, present perfect tense 'have been going' is used. 'from age of 14' should be 'since the age of 14'.

× From that day I'm going regularly to the library.

✓ Since that day, I have been going regularly to the library.

To express an action started in the past and continuing to present, present perfect continuous tense 'have been going' is appropriate. 'I'm going' is present continuous and does not fit the context.

× Sometimes I also go with my friends which sit there and study peacefully.

✓ Sometimes I also go with my friends who sit there and study peacefully.

'which' is used for things, not people. For people, 'who' is the correct relative pronoun.

× Yes, I need your uh, more prone to the, uh study and getting knowledge and I, I saw many Chinese people kids are going to the library when regular basis to uh, staff or study for was.

✓ Yes, I think they are more prone to studying and gaining knowledge, and I have seen many Chinese kids going to the library on a regular basis to study or do their work.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'I need your uh' is incorrect; 'I think they are' is appropriate. 'study and getting knowledge' should be 'studying and gaining knowledge' to use parallel gerunds. 'many Chinese people kids' is incorrect; 'many Chinese kids' is correct. 'when regular basis' should be 'on a regular basis'. 'staff or study for was' is unclear; 'study or do their work' is a clearer expression.