Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a brief reason or frequency detail. Use linking words if you add details. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library to study and do my homework. I usually go there three times a week because it is quiet and has many useful resources.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence stating main activities, then give specific examples using linking words. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'working on my master's in Food Science and Technology', 'articles', 'references'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I am currently working on my master's in Food Science and Technology, so I usually search for academic articles and journals in the library. For example, I look for recent studies and reference books to support my assignments and research.

Sugerencia: Good content and coherence but refine grammar and tighten sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid redundancy and small hesitations.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. The library was one of my favorite places because it was peaceful and I could use the computers to do my homework. I also enjoyed meeting friends there and borrowing picture books.

Sugerencia: Avoid unclear phrasing and repetition; be concise and respectful. Start by briefly stating you are not certain, then give a balanced opinion with reasons and linking words. Use correct tense and avoid stereotyping language.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese, but I believe many Chinese students use libraries frequently. In my view, they often study there to prepare for exams and access study materials.

× Yes, I always go to the library or to study or to make my homework.

✓ Yes, I always go to the library to study or to do my homework.

The verbs following 'go to the library' should use the base form with 'to' (infinitive) or gerund consistently. 'To study' is correct, but 'to make my homework' is incorrect; English uses 'do homework'. Use parallel structure: 'to study or to do my homework.' Suggestion: Use 'do' with 'homework' and keep verb forms parallel.

× I am fiddling my master in food science technology.

✓ I am studying for my master's in Food Science and Technology.

The phrase 'fiddling my master' is incorrect. Use 'studying for my master's' to indicate enrolment in a master's degree. 'Food Science and Technology' should be capitalized as a proper program name. Also possessive form 'master's' is required. Suggestion: Use 'studying for my master's degree in Food Science and Technology.'

× So I go to the library to find any channel or article that relates to my study and I make a good references there.

✓ So I go to the library to find articles or channels that relate to my studies, and I use them as good references there.

Use plural 'articles' and 'references' to match 'any' and countable usage. 'Relates to my study' should be 'relate to my studies.' 'Make a good references' is ungrammatical; 'use them as good references' or 'find good references' is correct. Also keep verb agreement: 'articles or channels that relate...'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and correct verbs 'relate' and 'use'.

× When I was a kid, that was one of my favorite place to go.

✓ When I was a kid, that was one of my favorite places to go.

The phrase 'one of my favorite' requires a plural noun: 'places.' 'Place' must be plural when preceded by 'one of my.' Suggestion: Use 'places' after 'one of my favorite.'

× It sounds kind of boring, but I really did enjoy my time there.

✓ It sounded kind of boring, but I really did enjoy my time there.

The context is past ('When I was a kid'), so the verb 'sounds' should be past tense 'sounded' to match the time reference. Using present tense creates a tense inconsistency. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the past context.

× I went to see my friends and went to make the homework by using the computer there.

✓ I went to see my friends and did my homework using the computer there.

Use 'did my homework' instead of 'make the homework.' 'By using' is wordy; 'using' is more natural. Also combine actions: 'went to see' and 'did my homework.' Suggestion: Use 'do' for homework and simplify prepositional phrase.

× I do not know much about them because, uh, I am late, not Chinese, but from my point of view, I think they went there often because we can see that Chinese, uh, Chinese, Chinese, Chinese are excellent with their studies.

✓ I do not know much about them because I am Lao, not Chinese, but from my point of view, I think they go there often because we can see that Chinese students are excellent in their studies.

Multiple issues: 'I am late' seems to be a mishearing; likely 'I am Lao' (nationality) fits. Use present tense 'go' for habitual action instead of past 'went.' 'Chinese, Chinese...' repetition removed. Use 'Chinese students' to clarify reference and 'excellent in their studies' is idiomatic. Pronoun 'them' earlier is acceptable but clarified. Suggestion: Clarify nationality word, use present tense for habitual actions, and specify 'students.'

× And of course, they will spend their time more in the library.

✓ And of course, they spend more time in the library.

The speaker is describing a habitual behavior, so simple present 'spend' is appropriate rather than future 'will spend.' Also natural word order is 'spend more time in the library.' Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions.