Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。例えば、「I like buying shoes I bought」は意味が曖昧で、「I like buying shoes」または「I buy shoes several times a year」と簡潔に答えるべきです。より自然で効果的な答え方を心がけ、文を短くし、明確に質問に答えましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy them several times a year.

Sugerencia: 文法と表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。「I am almost now」は意味不明で、「I usually buy shoes online」などの表現が適切です。また、「at the Internet」ではなく「on the Internet」や「online」を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: I usually buy shoes online, but if I can't find the ones I want, I buy them in a store.

Sugerencia: 「I haven't so much money」は不自然な表現です。「I don't have much money」が正しいです。また、理由を述べる際は接続詞を使い、文をつなげると自然になります。

Ejemplo: I usually spend under ¥10,000 because I don't have much money since I'm a student.

Sugerencia: 文法ミスと意味の不明瞭さがあります。「stylish fashionable 1」は誤りで、「stylish and fashionable」が正しいです。また、理由を述べる際は明確な文を使い、接続詞でつなげましょう。

Ejemplo: Both are important, but I prefer stylish and fashionable shoes because I believe shoes that are not comfortable at first can become comfortable over time.

× Yes, I like buying shoes I bought.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes.

The original sentence combines two ideas without proper conjunction or punctuation, causing confusion. The phrase 'I bought' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. To improve clarity, remove 'I bought' or connect the ideas properly.

× I will buy the shoes at the Internet.

✓ I will buy the shoes on the Internet.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to the Internet. The correct preposition is 'on' because we say 'on the Internet' to indicate the platform or medium.

× I haven't so much money because I'm a student.

✓ I don't have so much money because I'm a student.

The phrase 'I haven't so much money' is incorrect because 'have' as a verb of possession requires 'do' support in negative sentences. The correct form is 'I don't have so much money.'

× I prefer to choose stylish fashionable 1 because I think the shoes that is firstly not comfortable become comfortable.

✓ I prefer to choose stylish fashionable shoes because I think shoes that are initially not comfortable become comfortable.

The original sentence has a pronoun error ('that is' should be 'that are') to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. Also, 'firstly' is awkward here; 'initially' is more appropriate. The number '1' seems to be a typo and should be removed.