Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to give a direct answer first, then add clear supporting details. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on correct sentence structure. For example, mention how often you buy shoes and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. When I was a student and unemployed, I couldn't buy many shoes. But now, since I have a job, I sometimes buy shoes from local shops.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many repetitions and unclear phrases. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary details that confuse the answer. Speak clearly about your experience and future plans.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online. However, my friend Shakil recently bought Adidas shoes online and he liked them. I hope to buy shoes online myself in the next few months.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then add specific details without repeating words. Also, mention the currency and describe the shoes briefly but clearly.

Ejemplo: The most I have spent on shoes is 5000 taka. I bought a beautiful red and black pair from Epic Showroom last year.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing due to incorrect word usage and repetition. Use correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear preference and supporting reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they feel soft and flexible. Recently, I bought a comfortable pair from Avicii Room near my home for about 3000 taka.

× I like buying shoes in my undergrad undergraduate so when I was a unemployed I hadn't the opportunity to buy bike shoes.

✓ I liked buying shoes during my undergraduate studies, but when I was unemployed, I didn't have the opportunity to buy bike shoes.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'in my undergrad undergraduate' which is unclear and redundant. Also, 'a unemployed' should be 'unemployed' without 'a' because 'unemployed' is an adjective, not a noun. The verb tense should be past to match the time frame. The phrase 'hadn't the opportunity' is awkward; 'didn't have the opportunity' is correct.

× But now I am doing a job and I have a pani in in in my mother's salary so I some sometimes buy shows from a lot and.

✓ But now I have a job and I have some money from my mother's salary, so I sometimes buy shoes from a lot.

The sentence has unclear pronoun use and repeated words ('pani in in in'). 'Doing a job' is incorrect; 'have a job' is correct. 'Shows' should be 'shoes'. The phrase 'buy shows from a lot' is unclear; likely meant 'buy shoes a lot' or 'buy shoes from a store'.

× No, I never never bought shows online, but one of my friends his name is Shakil who who recently bought a Adidas shows online and that's looks pretty good.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online, but one of my friends, his name is Shakil, recently bought Adidas shoes online and they look pretty good.

The sentence incorrectly uses simple past 'bought' with 'never' which is better with present perfect 'have never bought' for experience. 'Shows' should be 'shoes'. 'That's looks' is incorrect; 'they look' is correct for plural 'shoes'.

× I I wish I I also buy buy one of Monday I think I think within next few next few months and there is a judge.

✓ I wish I could also buy one on Monday. I think within the next few months I will.

The sentence is confusing and repetitive. 'I wish I also buy' should be 'I wish I could also buy'. 'One of Monday' is unclear; likely 'one on Monday'. The phrase 'there is a judge' is unrelated and unclear, so omitted. The future intention is better expressed with 'I will'.

× I think my maximum. Shows was 5000, which which is a which which I bought from Epic Showroom I think in last year and that that's a very, very, very beautiful shows which is which is a red and black.

✓ I think the most I spent on shoes was 5000, which I bought from Epic Showroom last year. They are very beautiful shoes, red and black in color.

'Shows' should be 'shoes'. The sentence has repeated words and awkward structure. 'In last year' should be 'last year'. 'Which is a red and black' is incorrect; better to say 'red and black in color'.

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✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they feel very comfortable and flexible when I wear them. I recently bought a pair of comfortable shoes from Avicii Room, which is close to us, for nearly 3000.

'Them controversial' is incorrect; likely meant 'comfortable shoes'. 'Comfort' should be 'comfortable' as an adjective. 'Computer shows' is incorrect; should be 'comfortable shoes'. The sentence is fragmented and has repeated words. 'Avicii room who is close to us' should be 'Avicii Room, which is close to us'.