Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'buy Sue', 'beyond every day cold'). Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I'm not very fond of buying shoes frequently. However, when I do, I prefer Nike because their shoes are very comfortable. For example, I can wear them for running or casual outings, and they keep my feet comfortable all day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but incomplete at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to check the quality and fit in person. This way, I can ensure they are comfortable and the right size, which is difficult to judge from online pictures.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some errors (e.g., 'spend money on suits' instead of 'shoes'). Try to answer directly with clear sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly.

Ejemplo: I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes. However, if I need to buy a high-quality pair, I am willing to spend more. On the other hand, for regular shoes, I prefer to spend less.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for everyday wear because I often have to walk or stand for long periods, especially at work or shopping. Therefore, comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× Ah really? I'm not a fan of shoes but umm, if I had to buy Sue I would buy a Nike because it is very comfortable and we can go anywhere we can run, we can be comfortable wearing everywhere and beyond every day cold.

✓ Ah really? I'm not a fan of shoes but umm, if I had to buy shoes I would buy Nike because they are very comfortable and we can go anywhere, we can run, and we can be comfortable wearing them everywhere, even in cold weather every day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Sue' instead of 'shoes' and 'a Nike' instead of 'Nike' or 'a pair of Nike shoes'. Also, pronouns like 'it' should refer to plural 'shoes' as 'they'. The sentence structure is confusing and lacks clarity. Correcting pronouns and clarifying the sentence improves understanding.

× No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer quality and fit in person.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to check quality and fit in person.

The phrase 'prefer quality and fit in person' is unclear. Adding 'to check' clarifies the action. The preposition 'in' is correct here, but the sentence needs a verb to complete the meaning.

× It is important for me to try and make sure they are comfortable and right in size because sometimes in online pictures they show they don't show true quality so I've.

✓ It is important for me to try them on and make sure they are comfortable and the right size because sometimes online pictures do not show the true quality.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing, especially the ending 'so I've'. The phrase 'try' should be 'try them on' to indicate trying shoes. The sentence is restructured for clarity and completeness.

× Uh, I'm not really that much person to spend money on suits, but if I have to do I'll take on quality.

✓ Uh, I'm not really the type of person to spend much money on shoes, but if I have to, I'll focus on quality.

'That much person' is incorrect; it should be 'the type of person'. 'Suits' is likely a mispronunciation or error for 'shoes'. 'Take on quality' is incorrect; 'focus on quality' is appropriate. The sentence is corrected for singular/plural and clarity.

× If it is a better quality I spend much, but if it's a regular one I spend less on the shoes.

✓ If it is better quality, I spend more, but if it's regular, I spend less on shoes.

'Spend much' is incorrect; 'spend more' is the correct comparative form. 'A better quality' should be 'better quality' without 'a'. The sentence is adjusted for proper quantifier and article usage.

× I prefer comfortable everyday wear shoes because in a heavy work or in a shopping store something we have very long run or some kind of walk so we have to be very comfortable and I like comfortable shoes to wear them on every day.

✓ I prefer comfortable everyday shoes because during heavy work or when shopping, we often have to walk or stand for a long time, so we need to be very comfortable. I like to wear comfortable shoes every day.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Phrases like 'in a heavy work' and 'something we have very long run' are incorrect. The sentence is restructured for clarity, correct prepositions, and proper sentence flow.