Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid slight redundancy such as 'I tend to buy' repeated twice. Also, adding a linking phrase would enhance coherence.

Ejemplo: I'm not particularly fond of buying new shoes; however, I usually purchase one or two pairs annually to ensure I have appropriate footwear for each season. For example, I buy winter boots to keep my feet warm during the colder months.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition like 'I tend to'. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I've purchased shoes online several times, particularly when looking for training or running sneakers. First, I search various websites to find my preferred model, and then I look for good discounts before making a purchase.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating 'tend to'. Also, be more specific and precise in your explanation.

Ejemplo: Since I don't buy shoes frequently, I prefer to invest in quality. Therefore, I usually spend around €100 or more on a pair, as I believe durable footwear is more cost-effective in the long run.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Avoid redundancy and try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more naturally.

Ejemplo: I always prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I walk a lot every day and need footwear that prevents pain. Consequently, I usually opt for sneakers as they provide the necessary support.

× I tend to buy one pair or two pairs of shoes each year to make sure that I will have something suitable to wear for different seasons.

✓ I tend to buy one or two pairs of shoes each year to make sure that I will have something suitable to wear for different seasons.

The phrase 'one pair or two pairs' is awkward and redundant. It is more natural to say 'one or two pairs' to indicate quantity. This improves the flow and clarity of the sentence.

× Because I don't buy shoes quite often, I tend to invest more on quality.

✓ Because I don't buy shoes quite often, I tend to invest more in quality.

The verb 'invest' is typically followed by the preposition 'in' when referring to spending resources on something. Using 'on' here is incorrect. Therefore, 'invest more in quality' is the correct form.

× Therefore, each time when I need to invest on a new pair of shoes, I tend to spend €100 or even hires to buy a new footwear could last me longer.

✓ Therefore, each time when I need to invest in a new pair of shoes, I tend to spend €100 or even higher because buying new footwear could last me longer.

First, 'invest on' should be 'invest in' as explained before. Second, 'hires' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'higher' to indicate a larger amount. Third, the sentence structure is awkward and incomplete; adding 'because' clarifies the reason. Also, 'a new footwear' is incorrect because 'footwear' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× Therefore, each time when I need to invest on a new pair of shoes, I tend to spend €100 or even hires to buy a new footwear could last me longer.

✓ Therefore, each time when I need to invest in a new pair of shoes, I tend to spend €100 or even higher because buying new footwear could last me longer.

The word 'footwear' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' before 'new footwear' corrects this error.

× I would always choose comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes for health reasons since I need to walk a lot daily so that I really need a pair of shoes that could keep me away from pain.

✓ I would always choose comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes for health reasons since I need to walk a lot daily, so I really need a pair of shoes that can keep me away from pain.

The phrase 'so that I really need' is incorrect here because 'so that' implies purpose and is not appropriate. It should be replaced with 'so' to indicate consequence. Also, 'could' is less certain; 'can' is better to express ability or possibility in this context.