Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear, directly answering the question with a topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "Apart, not Highland."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially sports shoes because I am passionate about sports. I usually buy a new pair every month for exercise, and sometimes I purchase shoes for parties.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use clear and correct sentences, and explain your reasons logically with linking words. For example, explain why you don't trust online sizes and why buying in person is better for you.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I don't trust the sizing. Since my feet are average size, I prefer to buy shoes in stores where I can try them on and see a variety of options.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Be clear and direct about how much you spend, and avoid unclear phrases like "my mother prays with me." Use linking words to explain your spending habits.

Ejemplo: It depends, but I usually buy shoes every month and spend a significant part of my income on them. Sometimes, my mother advises me not to buy too many shoes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct grammar and linking words to compare past and present preferences clearly.

Ejemplo: When I was a teenager, I followed fashion trends, but now I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is more important to me than style.

× Absolutely yes, especially about the sports shows because I'm passionate about the sport.

✓ Absolutely yes, especially about sports shoes because I'm passionate about the sport.

The phrase 'sports shows' is incorrect; it should be 'sports shoes' to refer to footwear related to sports. Also, 'sports' here is an adjective describing 'shoes' and does not need to be pluralized as 'shows'.

× So every month I buy a year, a sports shoe and a runner for my exercise and sometimes when I want to go to party I buy shoes.

✓ So every month I buy a pair of sports shoes and running shoes for my exercise, and sometimes when I want to go to a party, I buy shoes.

The original sentence has singular/plural confusion and awkward phrasing. 'A year' is incorrect here; likely meant 'a pair'. 'A sports shoe' should be plural 'sports shoes' or 'a pair of sports shoes'. 'A runner' is better expressed as 'running shoes'. Also, 'go to party' needs an article 'a party'.

× Apart, not Highland.

✓ Apart from that, not high-end.

The phrase 'Apart, not Highland' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions and vocabulary. 'Apart from that' is a correct phrase to add information. 'Highland' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'high-end', which means expensive or fashionable.

× Actually not because I'm not trusted there size of the online size because the size of my feet are normal.

✓ Actually not, because I don't trust the sizing online since the size of my feet is normal.

'I'm not trusted' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't trust' to express lack of trust. Also, 'there size of the online size' is confusing; it should be 'the sizing online'. Subject-verb agreement corrected in 'size of my feet is normal' since 'size' is singular.

× So I prefer to purchase shoes ritual and it's more convenient to me because I can see a variety of the shoes in between.

✓ So I prefer to purchase shoes in person, and it's more convenient for me because I can see a variety of shoes in between.

'Shoes ritual' is incorrect; likely meant 'in person' or 'at a store'. 'More convenient to me' should be 'more convenient for me'. 'A variety of the shoes' should be 'a variety of shoes' without 'the'.

× Actually it depends. For instance, as I told before, I purchase shoes every month and I think I use most of my income for shoes and sometimes my mother prays with me to don't buy any specific shoes.

✓ Actually, it depends. For instance, as I said before, I purchase shoes every month and I think I use most of my income for shoes, and sometimes my mother prays with me not to buy any specific shoes.

'Prays with me to don't buy' is incorrect modal and verb form usage. It should be 'prays with me not to buy'. Also, 'told before' is better as 'said before' in this context.

× When I was a teenager, I followed the follow the fashion and trend, but nowadays I prefer to purchase a comfortable shoes because my convenient are more important than fashion and the other subjects.

✓ When I was a teenager, I followed fashion and trends, but nowadays I prefer to purchase comfortable shoes because my convenience is more important than fashion and other things.

'Followed the follow the fashion and trend' is redundant and incorrect; should be 'followed fashion and trends'. 'A comfortable shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; should be 'comfortable shoes'. 'My convenient are' is incorrect; should be 'my convenience is'. 'The other subjects' is vague; 'other things' is clearer.