Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'I, I'm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'reflect one's personality' instead of 'reflect everybody personality'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair every month. I believe shoes reflect a person's personality, so choosing the right ones is important to me.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to link your ideas more smoothly using linking words such as 'because' or 'therefore'. Also, be more specific about why buying online was not a good experience to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I didn't have a good experience because I couldn't try them on beforehand. Therefore, I prefer purchasing shoes from physical stores.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh' and 'per per'. Complete your sentences fully to avoid leaving ideas unfinished. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons for your spending habits.

Ejemplo: I usually spend a moderate amount, around 100 to 200 pounds, on shoes. I prefer investing in good quality, comfortable shoes because I enjoy walking regularly and want to take care of my feet as I get older.

Sugerencia: Be careful with word choice; 'food fare' seems to be a mistake. Use the correct term 'comfortable shoes'. Also, start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your preference with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they are more durable and better for my feet. Since I walk regularly and want to maintain good foot health as I age, comfort is my priority.

× In my opinion, uh, shoes can reflect everybody personality and it's very important for me.

✓ In my opinion, uh, shoes can reflect everybody's personality and it's very important for me.

The phrase 'everybody personality' is incorrect because 'everybody' is a singular indefinite pronoun and requires a possessive form 'everybody's' to correctly modify 'personality'. Using the possessive form clarifies that the personality belongs to everybody.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes uh, for example, around 100 to 200 per per.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, uh, for example, around 100 to 200 per pair.

The phrase 'per per' is incorrect and likely a typographical error. The correct term is 'per pair' when referring to shoes, as shoes are typically bought in pairs. This correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the plural form.

× I prefer investing in quality food fare because they are more comfortable and durable, which is important to me since I enjoy walking regularly and want to take care of my feet as I get older.

✓ I prefer investing in quality footwear because they are more comfortable and durable, which is important to me since I enjoy walking regularly and want to take care of my feet as I get older.

The phrase 'quality food fare' is incorrect in this context because 'food fare' relates to food, not shoes. The correct term is 'quality footwear' when referring to shoes. This correction ensures the adjective correctly describes the noun related to shoes.