Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız oldukça doğal ve etkili, ancak "adds exciting aspect" ifadesi dilbilgisi açısından düzeltilmeli ve cümleniz biraz daha akıcı hale getirilebilir. Ayrıca, bağlaç kullanımı ile cümlenizi daha tutarlı yapabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers. I try to purchase new pairs every three months because I love collecting limited edition models that are unique and stylish. Moreover, I sometimes resell some shoes if I find a good deal, which adds an exciting aspect to my hobby and helps me fund future purchases.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi ve kelime hataları var (örneğin, "a VI variety" ve "I was first running shoes" ifadeleri). Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of styles and compare prices without leaving my home. For example, I once bought running shoes from an international website, which offered better deals than local stores.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda bazı küçük dilbilgisi hataları var (örneğin, "depends on type I want to buy" ve "this might seems"). Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Actually, the amount of money I usually spend on shoes depends on the type I want to buy. For instance, if I'm looking for brand new trendy shoes, I typically spend around 1000 Turkish Lira. Although this might seem a bit costly, I believe it's worth the price because many people appreciate the high quality and stylish design of these shoes.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız genel olarak iyi, ancak "a comfortable footwear" ifadesi yanlış kullanılmıştır. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar ekleyebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm a student and often have to walk a long distance to get to university. Wearing comfortable footwear has helped me avoid pain and stay focused throughout the day. Although ultra fashionable shoes might look nice, they are usually less practical for my daily routine.

× Sometimes I also resell some shoes if I find a good deal, which adds exciting aspect to my hobby and help me fund future purchases.

✓ Sometimes I also resell some shoes if I find a good deal, which adds an exciting aspect to my hobby and helps me fund future purchases.

The phrase 'adds exciting aspect' is missing the article 'an' before 'exciting aspect' because 'aspect' is a singular countable noun. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'adds an exciting aspect'. This is a singular and plural issue involving subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× It is very convenient because I can browse a VI variety of styles and compare price without leaving my home.

✓ It is very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of styles and compare prices without leaving my home.

The phrase 'a VI variety' is incorrect; it should be 'a wide variety' to correctly express a large range. Also, 'compare price' should be 'compare prices' because 'prices' is plural when comparing multiple items. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and quantifiers.

× For example, I was first running shoes from an international website which offered better deals than local stores.

✓ For example, I first bought running shoes from an international website which offered better deals than local stores.

The original sentence is missing the main verb 'bought' and has an incorrect word order. 'I was first running shoes' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'I first bought running shoes'. This is a sentence structure error.

× Actually, the amount of money I usually spend on shoes depends on type I want to buy.

✓ Actually, the amount of money I usually spend on shoes depends on the type I want to buy.

The phrase 'depends on type I want to buy' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'type' because it refers to a specific type. This is a singular and plural issue involving article usage with singular countable nouns.

× Although this might seems a bit costly, I believe it's worth the price because many people appreciate that high quality and stylish design of these shoes.

✓ Although this might seem a bit costly, I believe it's worth the price because many people appreciate the high quality and stylish design of these shoes.

The verb 'seems' should be 'seem' after the modal verb 'might' because modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'that high quality' should be 'the high quality' to correctly specify the quality. This is a third person singular issue and article error.

× Wearing a comfortable footwear has helped me avoid pain and stay focused throughout the day.

✓ Wearing comfortable footwear has helped me avoid pain and stay focused throughout the day.

The word 'footwear' is an uncountable noun and does not need the indefinite article 'a'. Using 'a comfortable footwear' is incorrect. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/articles with uncountable nouns.