Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a new shoes' và 'this shoes'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về tần suất mua giày và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers and basketball shoes. I usually buy new ones only when my old shoes are worn out and no longer usable, so it doesn't happen very often.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'a years ago' nên là 'a year ago'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'shoe' nhiều lần. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often shop online. The first time I bought shoes online was about a year ago, and I was thrilled because the quality was excellent and the shoes were very comfortable.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít khi dùng danh từ, ví dụ 'a new shoes' nên là 'a new pair of shoes'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about $100 on a new pair of shoes because I believe it's a reasonable price for high-quality footwear.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'it make me' nên là 'they make me'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'go to'.

Ejemplo: Well, it depends on the occasion. For parties, work, or important meetings, I prefer fashionable shoes because they make me look better. However, for daily activities like going to school, I choose comfortable shoes.

× And about how often do I buy a new shoes?

✓ And about how often do I buy new shoes?

The noun 'shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' which is singular should not be used before it. The correct form is 'new shoes' without 'a'.

× I just wear this shoes to when they are broke and cannot use.

✓ I just wear these shoes until they are broken and cannot be used.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular but 'shoes' is plural, so it should be 'these shoes'. Also, 'broke' is the past tense verb, but here the adjective 'broken' is needed. 'Cannot use' is incomplete; it should be 'cannot be used'.

× the first time I have bought a new shoes online is a years ago

✓ the first time I bought new shoes online was years ago

Again, 'a new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural. Also, 'a years ago' is incorrect; it should be 'years ago' without 'a'. The tense should be simple past 'bought' to match the time expression 'years ago'.

× and the shoe is amazing and I feel over the moon.

✓ and the shoes are amazing and I feel over the moon.

If referring to multiple shoes, 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' and the verb should agree in number: 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I really like this shoe because this quality is good and everything about it is great.

✓ I really like these shoes because their quality is good and everything about them is great.

If talking about multiple shoes, 'this shoe' should be 'these shoes'. The possessive pronoun 'this' should be 'their' to match plural 'shoes'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' for plural.

× I usually spend about $100 for a new shoes because I think it's a good price, a suitable and acceptable price for a brand new shoes with high quality.

✓ I usually spend about $100 for new shoes because I think it's a good price, a suitable and acceptable price for brand new shoes with high quality.

'a new shoes' and 'a brand new shoes' are incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The article 'a' should be removed.

× because it make me look better

✓ because it makes me look better

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× if I just go to school and go for daily I will choose comfortable shoes.

✓ if I just go to school and go out daily, I will choose comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'go for daily' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'go out daily' or 'go about daily activities'. Adding a comma before 'I will choose' improves sentence clarity.