Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai như 'show' thay vì 'shoes', và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, but I usually purchase them only once a year. This is because I prefer high-quality brands like Nike, which offer durable and comfortable shoes, so I don't need to buy new ones frequently.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'join them' nên là 'try them on', và câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tránh dùng từ không chính xác. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in stores. This way, I can make sure they fit well and look good on me, which makes me more confident about my purchase.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai như 'shows' thay vì 'shoes', 'sauce' thay vì 'shoes'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about 1 to 2 million Vietnamese Dong on a pair of shoes. I think this price is reasonable for high-quality brands like Nike or Adidas, which are durable and comfortable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ như 'refer' nên là 'prefer', 'paint' nên là 'pain'. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because they allow me to work or stand for long periods without pain or discomfort. For example, when I go shopping or travel, wearing comfortable shoes helps me avoid sore feet. Although fashionable shoes may look appealing, I believe comfort is more important for daily use.

× I love buying shoes but I only buy once a year because for me I often choose a high quality brands such as Nike ideas to buy shoes because their show is durable and comfortable therefore I don't need to buy shoes frequently which shift my.

✓ I love buying shoes but I only buy once a year because I often choose high quality brands such as Nike to buy shoes because their shoes are durable and comfortable; therefore, I don't need to buy shoes frequently which saves my money.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches: 'brands' is plural but preceded by 'a high quality' which is singular; 'ideas' is incorrect and likely a typo; 'show' should be 'shoes' plural to match the subject; 'shift my' is unclear and likely meant 'save my money'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical agreement.

× I like going to store to join them and make sure they look good at me and fit me as well.

✓ I like going to the store to try them on and make sure they look good on me and fit me as well.

The phrase 'going to store' needs the definite article 'the' before 'store'. 'Join them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'try them on' when referring to shoes. 'Look good at me' should be 'look good on me' to use the correct preposition for appearance.

× I often spend 1 to 2 million Vietnamese Dong for one shows because I think this is the logical cause for the high quality sauce which is durable and comfortable such as Nike or Adidas.

✓ I often spend 1 to 2 million Vietnamese Dong for one pair of shoes because I think this is the logical cost for high quality shoes which are durable and comfortable such as Nike or Adidas.

'One shows' is incorrect; 'one pair of shoes' is the correct singular form. 'Logical cause' should be 'logical cost' to refer to price. 'Sauce' is a typo and should be 'shoes'. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'shoes'.

× Yeah, I have that's I have seen before.

✓ Yeah, I have seen those before.

The phrase 'I have that's I have seen before' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be simplified to 'I have seen those before' to correctly use pronouns and verb forms.

× I refer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they allow me to work or stand for long periods without paint or discomfort.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they allow me to work or stand for long periods without pain or discomfort.

'Refer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer'. 'Paint' is a typo and should be 'pain'. These corrections fix the pronoun and word choice errors.