Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Старайтесь избегать повторов и заполнителей (например, "uh", "umm"), чтобы сделать речь более естественной и плавной. Также важно отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя связные предложения и правильные выражения времени.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy new shoes once every two years because my feet don't grow quickly.

Sugerencia: Используйте связующие слова для логичности и старайтесь завершать мысли. Также избегайте неопределённых выражений, уточняйте детали, чтобы ответ был более содержательным и понятным.

Ejemplo: Yes, I bought shoes online a year ago, but it was not a good experience because the shoes looked different in real life compared to the pictures. Therefore, I try to avoid buying shoes online now.

Sugerencia: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и избегать бессвязных фраз. Уточняйте информацию, чтобы ответ был понятен и логичен.

Ejemplo: I usually don't buy expensive shoes. I prefer comfortable and affordable ones, and I spend around 18 to 25 thousand yen on a pair.

Sugerencia: Избегайте двойных отрицаний и используйте более точные выражения. Также старайтесь использовать связующие слова для плавности речи и избегайте заполнителей.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones. However, I sometimes wear fashionable shoes for special events like weddings or parties, even though they are not very comfortable.

× I usually often did uh, for one time, for two years because, umm, my food don't grow.

✓ I usually don't buy often, maybe once every two years because, umm, my feet don't grow.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'did' with 'usually' which indicates a habitual action, so present tense should be used. Also, 'food' is a typo for 'feet'. The phrase 'for one time, for two years' is unclear and corrected to 'maybe once every two years' to express frequency properly.

× my food don't grow.

✓ my feet don't grow.

The word 'food' is a typo and should be 'feet' to correctly refer to the body part that affects shoe size.

× Yes, I've bought shoes online a year ago and I don't think that was a good experience for me and now I try to avoid this kind of purchase because I didn't like how it looked in real life because in the picture it was quite.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online a year ago and I don't think that was a good experience for me. Now I try to avoid this kind of purchase because I didn't like how they looked in real life; in the picture, they looked quite different.

The present perfect 'I've bought' is incorrectly used with a specific past time 'a year ago'; simple past 'I bought' is correct. Also, the sentence is long and unclear; splitting and clarifying pronouns improves clarity.

× I don't buy expensive one but I usually try to find more convenience and more affordable for my budget That usually an average price for shoes like 18 to 2530 thousand ¥14.00 and.

✓ I don't buy expensive ones but I usually try to find more convenient and affordable options for my budget. The usual average price for shoes is like 18,000 to 25,000 or 30,000 ¥14.00 and.

The singular 'one' should be plural 'ones' when referring to shoes in general. 'Convenience' is a noun; the adjective 'convenient' is needed here. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves meaning.

× I prefer buying comfortable shoes neither than fashionable.

✓ I prefer buying comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones.

'Neither than' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rather than' to express preference. Also, 'fashionable' should be followed by 'ones' to parallel 'comfortable shoes'.

× But sometimes I wear fashionable shoes for some special events like weddings, parties and some festivals maybe and umm they could look good but it can not be convenient and comfortable for me.

✓ But sometimes I wear fashionable shoes for special events like weddings, parties, and festivals, and they can look good but may not be convenient and comfortable for me.

The phrase 'some festivals maybe' is awkward; reordering and removing 'some' improves clarity. 'It can not' should be 'may not' to express possibility. Also, 'can not' is better written as 'cannot' or 'may not' here.