Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni uttor e beshi spostho o shanghatito bhabe kotha bolben. Proshner uttor shuru korben ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor proyojone supporting details deben. Apnar uttor e kichu obossoi bhul ache, ja shudhu kore boro kore bolte hobe na, kintu shanghatito o sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe bolte hobe. Apni linking words babohar korte paren jemon 'because', 'so', 'and' jate uttor ta logical hoye uthe.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially during different seasons. For example, I buy warm shoes in winter because I play badminton and need comfortable footwear. In summer, I prefer lighter shoes that keep my feet cool. So, my shoe buying depends on the season and my activities.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu obossoi bhul ache, ja spostho o shanghatito bhabe bolte hobe. Apni proshner uttor shuru korben ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor karon o uddharon diye uttor ta bistarito korben. Linking words babohar korben jate uttor ta logical hoye uthe. Apni 'because', 'so' er moto linking words babohar korte paren.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I had bad experiences with wrong sizes several times. So, I prefer buying shoes from physical stores where I can try them on. Therefore, I feel buying shoes in person is better for me.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu spostho bhul ache, ja shudhu kore boro kore bolte hobe na, kintu shanghatito o sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe bolte hobe. Apni proshner uttor shuru korben ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor supporting details deben. Linking words babohar korben jate uttor ta logical hoye uthe.

Ejemplo: I usually spend around 30 to 40 pounds on shoes in the UK. However, for special occasions like weddings, I spend more because I want to look good and enjoy the event. So, my spending depends on the occasion.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, ja spostho o shanghatito bhabe bolte hobe. Apni proshner uttor shuru korben ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor supporting details deben. Linking words babohar korben jate uttor ta logical hoye uthe. Apni 'because', 'so' er moto linking words babohar korte paren. Apnar vocabulary aro bhalo korte paren, jate uttor ta proshner sathe bhalo mile.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for daily use because I stay at home or go out casually. However, for special occasions like weddings, I choose fashionable shoes that attract attention and earn compliments.

× It's really depends on the mood and sometimes it depends on the season.

✓ It really depends on the mood and sometimes it depends on the season.

The verb 'depends' requires the subject to be singular without 'is'. 'It' is singular, so the correct form is 'It depends', not 'It's depends'.

× I would buy shoes in uh, summer season pool.

✓ I would buy shoes in the summer season too.

The preposition 'in' is correct for seasons, but 'pool' is incorrect here. Likely, 'too' was intended to indicate addition. Also, 'the' is needed before 'summer season'.

× And during winter I buy seafood, uh, kind of shoes like buying school shoe shoes.

✓ And during winter I buy soft, uh, kind of shoes like buying school shoes.

The word 'seafood' is incorrect in this context; likely 'soft' or another adjective was intended. Also, 'school shoe shoes' is redundant; 'school shoes' is correct. Preposition use is not the main issue but word choice is incorrect here.

× I had an experience buying across food times in from online and every time the measurement measurement of my clothes was on correct.

✓ I had an experience buying across four times from online and every time the measurement of my clothes was incorrect.

The phrase 'across food times in from online' is incorrect. It should be 'across four times from online'. Also, 'on correct' should be 'incorrect'. Prepositions 'from' is correct here.

× So I feel like buying buy buying physical is better than buying virtual.

✓ So I feel like buying physical shoes is better than buying virtual ones.

The phrase 'buy buying physical' is incorrect and repetitive. Also, 'virtual' should be followed by a noun like 'ones' to clarify meaning. Pronoun use is corrected for clarity.

× I will spend around 4000 two 5000 accounts shoes which is about 30 to 40 LB in Ek in the UK.

✓ I will spend around 4000 to 5000 on shoes which is about 30 to 40 pounds in the UK.

The phrase '4000 two 5000 accounts shoes' is incorrect. It should be '4000 to 5000 on shoes'. Also, 'LB' should be 'pounds' and 'Ek' is unnecessary. Quantifier and unit expressions are corrected.

× If there is a special occasion like a wedding, I must spend more because I want to have a good experience and learn something here.

✓ If there is a special occasion like a wedding, I must spend more because I want to have a good experience and learn something new.

The phrase 'learn something here' is awkward; 'learn something new' is more natural. Preposition 'here' is unnecessary in this context.

× Well, I prefer wheels.

✓ Well, I prefer wheels.

The word 'wheels' seems out of context and likely a mispronunciation or error. Possibly 'well' or 'well, it depends' was intended. However, as per instructions, only grammar mistakes from the list are corrected, so this is left as is.

× If I'm staying in my room and going out sometimes then I feel like comfortable shoes.

✓ If I'm staying in my room and going out sometimes, then I prefer comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'I feel like comfortable shoes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I prefer comfortable shoes'. Pronoun and verb usage corrected for clarity.

× And if I'm going to a wedding or or or a occasion, then I prefer wearing fashion or shoes that attracts people.

✓ And if I'm going to a wedding or an occasion, then I prefer wearing fashionable shoes that attract people.

The article 'a' before 'occasion' should be 'an' because 'occasion' starts with a vowel sound. 'Fashion or shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'fashionable shoes'. Also, 'attracts' should be 'attract' to agree with plural 'shoes'. Prepositions and articles corrected.