Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy a new pair once a year because my shoes last a long time. For example, I always buy size 39 shoes, so I only need to replace them when they are worn out.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Please answer directly and clearly, explaining your reasons with specific details and linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I do not have access to online shopping websites on my phone, and I do not have a bank account to pay online.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and speak more clearly. Also, explain your answer with specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: I usually spend between $10 and $20 on shoes because I am not very interested in fashion. Therefore, I prefer to buy simple lace-up shoes that are affordable.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to explain your preference with specific reasons and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because wearing fashionable shoes often causes foot pain or injuries. Therefore, comfortable shoes are better for my health.

× I usually buy shoes in one year because most of the time when I buy the shoes the they will be enough for me.

✓ I usually buy shoes once a year because most of the time when I buy shoes they are enough for me.

The phrase 'in one year' is incorrect for frequency; 'once a year' is the correct expression. Also, 'the they' is a typographical error and should be 'they'. The plural noun 'shoes' is correctly used without 'the' in this context.

× For example if my shoes number is 39 and I will buy.

✓ For example, if my shoe size is 39, I will buy them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Shoes number' should be 'shoe size'. Also, the sentence needs a main verb and object to be complete.

× I would never bought shoes in online because I'm adult or child and in my phone it doesn't have online website or many accounting or bank.

✓ I would never buy shoes online because I am neither an adult nor a child, and my phone does not have online shopping websites or banking apps.

'Would never bought' is incorrect; 'would never buy' is correct modal + base verb form. 'In online' should be 'online'. The sentence also has unclear parts; 'I'm adult or child' is corrected to 'I am neither an adult nor a child' for clarity. 'Online website or many accounting or bank' is corrected to 'online shopping websites or banking apps' for meaning and grammar.

× I would never bought shoes in online because I'm adult or child and in my phone it doesn't have online website or many accounting or bank.

✓ I would never buy shoes online because I am neither an adult nor a child, and my phone does not have online shopping websites or banking apps.

The preposition 'in' before 'online' is incorrect; 'online' does not require a preposition here.

× I usually, uh, paint in my shoes, uh, minimum $10, uh, maximum is $20.00 because, uh, I don't interested in shoes so I, I buy lace shoes.

✓ I usually spend on my shoes a minimum of $10 and a maximum of $20 because I am not interested in shoes, so I buy lace shoes.

'Paint in my shoes' is incorrect; likely intended 'spend on my shoes'. 'I don't interested' should be 'I am not interested'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I usually, uh, paint in my shoes, uh, minimum $10, uh, maximum is $20.00 because, uh, I don't interested in shoes so I, I buy lace shoes.

✓ I usually spend on my shoes a minimum of $10 and a maximum of $20 because I am not interested in shoes, so I buy lace shoes.

The quantifiers 'minimum' and 'maximum' need to be used with 'a' and 'of' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because most of the times the woman legs will be injured so from the fashion shoes the comfortable comfortable shoes is perfect.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because most of the time women's legs get injured, so comfortable shoes are perfect compared to fashionable shoes.

'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time'. 'The woman legs' should be 'women's legs' (plural possessive). 'The comfortable comfortable shoes is perfect' should be 'comfortable shoes are perfect' to agree in number and avoid repetition.