Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase d'introduction claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques. Évitez les répétitions et les phrases confuses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but only when I really need them. I usually buy sneakers because they are comfortable, and occasionally I buy high heels for special occasions.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est bonne mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus fluide et en ajoutant des détails plus spécifiques.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I can find good discounts. However, I prefer shopping in stores because I like to try the shoes on to see which ones fit me best.

Sugerencia: La réponse est un peu confuse et manque de précision. Essayez de structurer votre réponse clairement et d'éviter les erreurs grammaticales pour améliorer la compréhension.

Ejemplo: I don't spend a lot of money on shoes. Usually, I buy two pairs of sneakers each year, and sometimes I buy high heels for special occasions.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est correcte mais pourrait être améliorée en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour mieux organiser les idées.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are suitable for everyday use. Fashionable shoes, on the other hand, are more appropriate for special occasions, so I wear them only sometimes.

× Yes, I like buying shoes but when I need to buy it because I don't want to spend money on any useful things, I often buy sneakers because I feel comfortable when I wear them and and I sometimes buy high heels.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes but when I need to buy them because I don't want to spend money on any useful things, I often buy sneakers because I feel comfortable when I wear them and sometimes I buy high heels.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them' to match the plural noun 'shoes'. Also, the repeated word 'and' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I found some discounts which are very interesting, but I prefer buying shoes in shops because I want to try them and choose which suits me the best.

✓ Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I find some discounts which are very interesting, but I prefer buying shoes in shops because I want to try them and choose which suits me the best.

The verb 'found' is in the past tense, but the sentence context is about habitual action, so the present tense 'find' is appropriate to indicate regular occurrence.

× I don't spend too much money on shoes, I usually buy 2 per two sneakers per year and sometimes I buy high heels for occasions.

✓ I don't spend too much money on shoes; I usually buy two pairs of sneakers per year and sometimes I buy high heels for occasions.

The phrase '2 per two sneakers' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'two pairs of sneakers' to correctly express quantity and plurality. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× As I said, I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable one because they are useful for everyday and fashionable shoes are useful for special occasions, so sometimes.

✓ As I said, I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because they are useful for everyday use and fashionable shoes are useful for special occasions, so sometimes.

The word 'one' should be plural 'ones' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. Also, 'everyday' should be 'everyday use' to correctly express the meaning.