Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
Yes, I like buying shoes because I like do some sports like running, jogging. So it is uh, umm, very important to choose the shoes and, umm, usually I buy shoes, uh, once or twice, umm, per semester and.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Yes, uh, most of my shoes are bought online and it is very convenient to choose the shoes online and buy it. But the disadvantage is if it is not the fee feed one for you and it is a complex.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
Well, I think if I buy a shoes twice per semester, uh, the shoes will cost uh 5 to CN¥600, so it is not much perspective umm per.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
Well, in my opinion, I will choose both fashionable and comfortable shoes. So it will cost a long time to for me to choose shows. But uh, if I choose one and I will wear it for a long time and it is.
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时语法错误较多,表达不够流畅,且有较多填充词。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes because I often do sports like running and jogging. Therefore, choosing the right shoes is very important. I usually buy shoes once or twice each semester.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,且内容不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇,避免模糊表达,并补充具体细节。
Ejemplo: Yes, I buy most of my shoes online because it is very convenient. However, sometimes the shoes don't fit well, which can be frustrating.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不准确,数字表达混乱。建议清晰表达价格范围,避免语法错误,并使用连贯的句子。
Ejemplo: I usually buy shoes twice a semester, and each pair costs between 500 and 600 Chinese yuan, which I think is reasonable.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不流畅,缺少具体细节。建议完整表达观点,使用连贯句子,并补充选择原因。
Ejemplo: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. Although it takes me a long time to choose, I believe it's worth it because I can wear them for a long time.
× I like do some sports like running, jogging.
✓ I like doing some sports like running, jogging.
动词like后面接动名词doing,而不是动词原形do。动词后接动名词是固定搭配。
× if I buy a shoes twice per semester
✓ if I buy shoes twice per semester
a shoes中shoes是复数,前面不能用不定冠词a,a只能修饰单数名词。
× it will cost a long time to for me to choose shows.
✓ it will take a long time for me to choose shoes.
shows应为shoes,且cost a long time用法不当,正确表达是take a long time。shows是错误拼写。