Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'I rarely buy it' 대신 'I rarely buy them'이 맞으며, 문장이 길고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 또한, 구체적인 빈도 표현이 부족합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 하며, 구체적인 빈도와 이유를 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I rarely buy them. Usually, I purchase new shoes only when the weather changes, such as buying rain boots during the rainy season.

Sugerencia: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'quite not a good experience' 대신 'not a very good experience'가 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 비교 구문에서 'compared to offline shops'가 더 적절합니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it was not a very good experience because the quality was poor compared to shoes from offline stores.

Sugerencia: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않고 문장이 중단되어 있습니다. 구체적인 금액이나 범위를 제시하며 명확하게 답변하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I usually spend around 50 to 100 dollars on shoes, depending on the type. For example, I spend more on formal leather shoes than casual ones.

Sugerencia: 답변이 비교적 자연스럽지만, 'a comfortable shoes'는 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 'comfortable shoes' 또는 'a comfortable pair of shoes'가 맞습니다. 또한, 문장을 더 간결하고 명확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I usually buy shoes only when I need them, so comfort is my top priority.

× Yes I like buying shoes but I rarely buy it because I just buy them when I am needed like the weather or uh in case of raining the rain boots and some.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes but I rarely buy them because I just buy them when I need to, like for the weather or, uh, in case of rain, rain boots and so on.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'when I am needed' is incorrect; it should be 'when I need to'. 'In case of raining' should be 'in case of rain'. These corrections fix singular/plural agreement and preposition usage.

× Yes, I have had an experience buying shoes online, but it was quite not a good experience because the shoe quality was very bad and comparing to the offline shops.

✓ Yes, I have had an experience buying shoes online, but it was not a very good experience because the shoe quality was very bad compared to offline shops.

The phrase 'quite not a good experience' is awkward; 'not a very good experience' is better. 'Comparing to' should be 'compared to' to correctly express comparison in past tense.

× Well, I can't see it varies because, uh, in a very formal kind of shoes like pumps or a leather, umm, leather shoes or things like.

✓ Well, I can't say it varies because, uh, I usually buy very formal kinds of shoes like pumps or leather shoes or things like that.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'I can't see it varies' is incorrect; 'I can't say it varies' is better. The phrase 'in a very formal kind of shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'very formal kinds of shoes'. The sentence needs completion for clarity.

× I should say definitely a comfortable shoes because like I said, I buy a shoe, uh, pair of shoes when I am needed.

✓ I should definitely say comfortable shoes because, like I said, I buy a pair of shoes when I need them.

'A comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'; it should be 'comfortable shoes' without 'a'. 'I buy a shoe, uh, pair of shoes' is redundant; 'a pair of shoes' suffices. 'When I am needed' is incorrect; it should be 'when I need them'.

× So the first thing I consider is how it is comfortable.

✓ So the first thing I consider is how comfortable it is.

The phrase 'how it is comfortable' is awkward. The correct word order is 'how comfortable it is' to properly express the idea.