Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and directly address the question. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair every month. This is because I value comfort highly, so I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones.

Sugerencia: Focus on grammatical accuracy and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your experience. Also, correct verb tenses and sentence structure will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it offers a wide variety of options and discounts. For instance, last month I purchased Adidas sneakers from Myntra at a discounted price.

Sugerencia: Try to organize your answer more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be careful with sentence structure and word order to make your answer more natural.

Ejemplo: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the occasion. For everyday use, I usually buy shoes costing between 2000 to 4000 rupees. However, for special occasions like weddings or festivals, I prefer to spend more, around 15,000 to 20,000 rupees.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence fluency and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to be more specific about why you prefer comfort.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because comfort is essential for me. When I wear comfortable shoes, I feel confident and can move freely without any discomfort.

× Honestly, I am a superholic person and I love to buy shoes and jacket as compared to my dresses and eventually I buy a pair of shoes every month because I am a very comfortable person.

✓ Honestly, I am a superholic person and I love buying shoes and jackets as compared to my dresses and eventually I buy a pair of shoes every month because I am a very comfortable person.

The verb 'love' is followed by the gerund form 'buying' to express preference or enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'jacket' should be plural 'jackets' to match the plural 'shoes' and the context of multiple items.

× Honestly, I am a superholic person and I love to buy shoes and jacket as compared to my dresses and eventually I buy a pair of shoes every month because I am a very comfortable person.

✓ Honestly, I am a superholic person and I love buying shoes and jackets as compared to my dresses and eventually I buy a pair of shoes every month because I am a very comfortable person.

The noun 'jacket' should be plural 'jackets' to be consistent with 'shoes' and to correctly indicate multiple items.

× To be honest I bought shoes online because it give me vast category of shoes and various pairs and also they give me online discount because that's why the price will be cheap.

✓ To be honest, I bought shoes online because it gives me a vast category of shoes and various pairs and also they give me online discounts, which is why the price is cheap.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'discount' should be plural 'discounts' to match 'various pairs'. Added commas and rephrased for clarity.

× To be honest I bought shoes online because it give me vast category of shoes and various pairs and also they give me online discount because that's why the price will be cheap.

✓ To be honest, I bought shoes online because it gives me a vast category of shoes and various pairs and also they give me online discounts, which is why the price is cheap.

The verb 'give' must be 'gives' when the subject is singular 'it' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I remember last month I buy Adidas sneakers and Myntra.

✓ I remember last month I bought Adidas sneakers from Myntra.

The verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match the past time reference 'last month'. Also, 'from Myntra' clarifies the source.

× Well, it depends on the occasion. If there is no occasion, I like to buy cheaper shoes of rupees 2000 to 4000.

✓ Well, it depends on the occasion. If there is no occasion, I like to buy cheaper shoes costing between rupees 2000 and 4000.

The phrase 'of rupees 2000 to 4000' is awkward; 'costing between rupees 2000 and 4000' is clearer and more natural.

× But if there is occasion like marriage or any festival I like to wear, I love to buy shoes more than 15 to ₹20,000.

✓ But if there is an occasion like a marriage or any festival, I love to buy shoes costing more than ₹15,000 to ₹20,000.

Added missing articles 'an' and 'a' before 'occasion' and 'marriage'. Also, corrected the phrase to express price range properly and removed 'I like to wear' which was misplaced.

× But if there is occasion like marriage or any festival I like to wear, I love to buy shoes more than 15 to ₹20,000.

✓ But if there is an occasion like a marriage or any festival, I love to buy shoes costing more than ₹15,000 to ₹20,000.

The definite article 'an' is needed before 'occasion' and 'a' before 'marriage' to be grammatically correct.

× In my perspective, I love to wear comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes wear.

✓ From my perspective, I love to wear comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes.

The phrase 'In my perspective' is better expressed as 'From my perspective'. Also, 'fashionable shoes wear' is incorrect; 'fashionable shoes' suffices.

× Comfort is must for the person and when I wear the comfortable shoes with my dresses, I look genuinely good and also appreciate me and I can do anything without any disturbance.

✓ Comfort is a must for a person, and when I wear comfortable shoes with my dresses, I look genuinely good and also receive appreciation, and I can do anything without any disturbance.

Added articles 'a' before 'must' and 'a person'. Removed 'the' before 'comfortable shoes' as it is general. Changed 'appreciate me' to 'receive appreciation' for correct meaning.