Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "she's for me" which seems incorrect. Try to give a clear and direct response with correct grammar and avoid filler words like "umm". Also, keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

Ejemplo: I don't particularly enjoy buying shoes because I consider them basic items. Usually, I only buy two pairs per season to keep my wardrobe simple.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Avoid incomplete sentences and provide more specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online once. They were church shoes from a Tamil website, and I really liked them because they were affordable and comfortable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words. Be specific about the currency and amount, and structure your answer clearly. Avoid hesitation sounds and provide a complete sentence.

Ejemplo: I usually spend around 10,000 rupees on a pair of shoes, especially trainers, which I prefer for autumn and winter seasons.

Sugerencia: Your answer is mostly clear but contains filler words and an incomplete ending. Try to avoid hesitation and finish your sentences properly. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Ejemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes; however, comfort is my priority because I drive often, so I need shoes that fit well to drive safely and comfortably.

× Actually, I don't think so because she's for me, it's something basic and I don't want to have a lot of shoes in my wardrobe.

✓ Actually, I don't think so because for me, it's something basic and I don't want to have a lot of shoes in my wardrobe.

The phrase 'she's for me' is incorrect here. The pronoun 'she' does not refer to anything appropriate in this context. The intended meaning is 'because for me, it's something basic'. Removing 'she's' corrects the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Bought once in my life and it was my church shoes.

✓ I have bought shoes once in my life and they were my church shoes.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'Bought once in my life' is incomplete. Adding 'I have' makes it a complete sentence. Also, 'it was my church shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so 'they were' is correct.

× Uh they were so cheap. I bought it in Tamil sites so and I really like it.

✓ Uh, they were so cheap. I bought them on Tamil sites and I really like them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'in Tamil sites' should be 'on Tamil sites' because we use 'on' for websites.

× I bought it in Tamil sites so and I really like it.

✓ I bought them on Tamil sites and I really like them.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to websites or online platforms. The correct preposition is 'on'. Also, the sentence is corrected for pronoun agreement as explained earlier.

× They are very.

✓ They are very good.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an adjective to complete the thought. Adding 'good' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Not much I think I can spend, just umm. 10,000 for one pair of shoes because if it's like a trainers or yeah I prefer trainers but for autumn and winter shoes.

✓ Not much, I think I can spend just about 10,000 for one pair of shoes because if it's like trainers, I prefer trainers, but for autumn and winter shoes...

The phrase 'if it's like a trainers' is incorrect because 'trainers' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and flow.

× I prefer both but comfort for me is on the 1st place so I drive my car and it's umm important for me to find shoes that will suit my foot so I can umm drive safely and feel comfortable on gas and.

✓ I prefer both, but comfort for me is in the first place. When I drive my car, it's important for me to find shoes that will suit my feet so I can drive safely and feel comfortable on the gas pedal.

The phrase 'comfort for me is on the 1st place' should be 'in the first place'. Also, 'suit my foot' should be plural 'feet' because people have two feet. 'Feel comfortable on gas and' is incomplete; 'gas pedal' clarifies the meaning.