Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "buying their shoes" instead of "buying shoes" and "for some occasion" instead of "on some occasions." Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase them twice a year. Most of the time, I buy sneakers, but on some occasions, I buy formal shoes to match the dress code.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and informative but could be improved by using clearer sentence structure and linking words to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, avoid filler words like "actually" and "umm."

Ejemplo: I enjoy buying shoes online because I have a busy schedule, and it saves me time. Initially, it was challenging to choose the right size, but after some experience, I learned how to purchase correctly.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides good reasons but contains some hesitations and unclear expressions like "UH-100" and filler words such as "uh" and "umm." Also, watch for singular/plural agreement ("each sneakers" should be "each pair of sneakers"). Try to be more precise and fluent.

Ejemplo: I usually spend between $100 and $200 on each pair of sneakers because I walk to university and work in the lab. It's important for me to have high-quality shoes to protect my feet.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "a comp a practical" and "shoes hairs out back." Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer buying practical and comfortable shoes because I care about my health and well-being. I know that some types of shoes can hurt the back and cause nerve problems.

× I enjoy buying their shoes and I usually purchase shoes twice a year.

✓ I enjoy buying shoes and I usually purchase shoes twice a year.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used here because it does not refer to any specific person or group. The sentence should simply say 'buying shoes' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× but for some occasion I'm buying formal shoes to match a dress code.

✓ but for some occasions I buy formal shoes to match a dress code.

The phrase 'for some occasion' is incorrect; it should be plural 'occasions' to indicate more than one event. Also, 'I'm buying' is inappropriate here because the sentence refers to habitual action, so simple present tense 'I buy' is correct.

× Actually, I spend between UH-100 to $200 for each sneakers because, uh, most of the time I walk to university and when I'm working in the lab, umm, it is really important for me to have a high quality sneakers to take care of my feet.

✓ Actually, I spend between $100 to $200 on each pair of sneakers because, uh, most of the time I walk to university and when I'm working in the lab, umm, it is really important for me to have high-quality sneakers to take care of my feet.

The phrase 'each sneakers' is incorrect because 'sneakers' is plural; it should be 'each pair of sneakers'. Also, 'UH-100' seems to be a typo and should be '$100'. 'High quality sneakers' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality sneakers' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer buying a comp a practical and comfortable shoes because I care about my health and well-being and I know that some kind of shoes hairs out back and they causes nerve problems.

✓ I prefer buying practical and comfortable shoes because I care about my health and well-being and I know that some kinds of shoes wear out the back and cause nerve problems.

The phrase 'a comp a practical and comfortable shoes' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'practical and comfortable shoes'. 'Some kind of shoes' should be pluralized to 'some kinds of shoes' to agree with 'shoes'. 'Hairs out back' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'wear out the back'. Also, 'they causes' should be 'they cause' to agree with the plural subject.