Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ваша відповідь містить деякі граматичні помилки та неточності у слововживанні, наприклад, "new shows" замість "new shoes". Також варто уникати повторів і надмірної кількості слів, які не додають змісту. Спробуйте формулювати речення більш природно і чітко, використовуючи зв'язки для кращої логіки.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I'm interested in fashion. I like to try new styles and usually buy new sneakers every season.

Sugerencia: Ваша відповідь зрозуміла, але містить граматичні помилки і деякі неточності, наприклад, "prefer do it" замість "prefer to do it". Також речення можна зробити більш зв'язним, використовуючи сполучники для кращої логіки.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I usually prefer shopping in physical stores because I can try them on to check if they are comfortable. When I buy online, I can't do that, so it's less convenient.

Sugerencia: Ваша відповідь містить помилки у вимові чисел і граматиці, наприклад, "101 hundred €50" не є коректним виразом. Спробуйте чітко і правильно називати суми, а також уникати зайвих слів, щоб відповідь була зрозумілою і природною.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about 150 euros on a pair of shoes, but it depends on the brand and style.

Sugerencia: Ваша відповідь має деякі граматичні помилки і незавершені речення, наприклад, "which is not so comfortable. Most fashionable." Спробуйте формулювати повні речення і використовувати зв'язки для кращої логіки та природності мови.

Ejemplo: For everyday wear, I definitely prefer comfortable shoes. However, I also own some fashionable shoes that are less comfortable but look great for special occasions.

× I like to explore new style and try new one on myself.

✓ I like to explore new styles and try new ones on myself.

The nouns 'style' and 'one' should be plural to match the context of exploring multiple styles and trying multiple shoes. Using singular forms here is incorrect because it implies only one style or one shoe, which contradicts the intended meaning.

× I like to buy some new shows every season.

✓ I like to buy some new shoes every season.

The word 'shows' is a misspelling of 'shoes'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar issue, but it affects clarity. Correcting it to 'shoes' is necessary.

× I'm really addicted with new sneakers

✓ I'm really addicted to new sneakers

The correct preposition to use with 'addicted' is 'to', not 'with'. Using 'with' is incorrect and changes the meaning or makes the sentence ungrammatical.

× Yes I have bought it online but I mostly prefer do it in a traditional shop

✓ Yes, I have bought them online but I mostly prefer to do it in a traditional shop

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'prefer do' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to do'.

× because there I can try it on my feet

✓ because there I can try them on my feet

Again, 'it' is incorrect for plural 'shoes'; 'them' should be used. This is a pronoun agreement issue.

× so I can clearly understand it is comfortable for me or I need to choose another side

✓ so I can clearly understand if they are comfortable for me or if I need to choose another size

'It' is incorrect for plural 'shoes'; 'they' should be used. Also, 'another side' is incorrect; the correct term is 'another size'. The sentence also needs 'if' to introduce the condition.

× but when I did it online I can't do it.

✓ but when I do it online I can't do that.

The tense inconsistency between 'did' and 'can't' is confusing; present tense 'do' fits better. Also, 'it' is vague; 'that' clarifies the action. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't know exactly how much I expenses on the shoe

✓ I don't know exactly how much I spend on shoes

'Expenses' is a noun, but the sentence requires a verb. 'Spend' is the correct verb here. Also, 'the shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match general meaning.

× but I think that when I bought new shoes I can spend around 101 hundred €50 on one pair

✓ but I think that when I buy new shoes I can spend around 150 euros on one pair

'101 hundred €50' is incorrect and confusing; it should be '150 euros'. Also, 'bought' (past tense) conflicts with 'can spend' (present/future modal), so 'buy' (present) is better here.

× When I choose the shoes that I will umm get on every day like BA daily basis

✓ When I choose the shoes that I will wear every day on a daily basis

'Get on' is incorrect collocation for shoes; 'wear' is correct. Also, 'BA' is likely a filler or typo and should be removed. 'On a daily basis' is the correct phrase.

× I exactly choose the comfortable one.

✓ I exactly choose the comfortable ones.

'One' is singular but 'shoes' is plural, so 'ones' should be used to refer to multiple shoes.

× But I also have several shoes which is not so comfortable.

✓ But I also have several shoes which are not so comfortable.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is' to agree in number.

× Most fashionable.

✓ Most are fashionable.

The sentence fragment 'Most fashionable.' lacks a verb and subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'are' completes the sentence.