Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and improving sentence structure. Also, clarify your points with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely enjoy buying new shoes. I usually buy a new pair every six months because I like to try different brands that offer unique and distinctive designs.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using linking words to make your response more coherent. Be specific about the advantages of buying shoes online.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prefer buying shoes online because I live in a village where it's difficult to visit shops or malls. Therefore, buying online saves me time and offers more convenience.

Sugerencia: Focus on improving grammar and sentence clarity. Avoid filler words and provide a clear comparison using linking words. Specify currency and explain reasons for your choices.

Ejemplo: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the situation. Sometimes, I buy affordable shoes costing around 1000 to 1500 rupees, but most of the time, I invest in expensive branded shoes because they offer better quality, comfort, and appearance.

Sugerencia: Work on grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for daily wear because they are practical. However, I sometimes choose fashionable shoes for special occasions like parties and weddings to match the dress code.

× I had lot of interest to buy new shoes on different company, which is very unique and different from another shoes.

✓ I had a lot of interest in buying new shoes from different companies, which are very unique and different from other shoes.

The phrase 'lot of interest' requires the article 'a' before 'lot'. 'Interest' is usually followed by the preposition 'in' when referring to liking something. 'Different company' should be plural 'different companies' to match the context. 'Another shoes' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns; 'other shoes' is correct for plural.

× I had lot of interest to buy new shoes on different company, which is very unique and different from another shoes.

✓ I had a lot of interest in buying new shoes from different companies, which are very unique and different from other shoes.

The correct preposition after 'interest' is 'in'. Also, 'buy new shoes on different company' should be 'buy new shoes from different companies' because 'from' indicates the source and 'companies' should be plural.

× I had lot of interest to buy new shoes on different company, which is very unique and different from another shoes.

✓ I had a lot of interest in buying new shoes from different companies, which are very unique and different from other shoes.

The past tense 'had' is correct here as the student refers to a past interest. However, the rest of the sentence needs correction for grammar and clarity.

× this very difficult for me to go at shop or at mall for buying shoes.

✓ it is very difficult for me to go to the shop or the mall to buy shoes.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to form the present tense 'it is'. Also, the preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition for movement towards a place. 'For buying shoes' should be 'to buy shoes' for correct infinitive usage.

× it's also save my time.

✓ it also saves my time.

The modal verb 'can' or 'does' is missing. The correct form is 'it also saves my time' using the third person singular present tense verb 'saves'.

× Actually it's depend on situation.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation.

The subject 'it' requires the third person singular present tense verb 'depends'. Also, 'the situation' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Sometime I prefer to buy cheap shoes around 1000 and 1500.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to buy cheap shoes costing around 1000 to 1500.

The adverb 'Sometime' should be plural 'Sometimes'. Also, the phrase 'around 1000 and 1500' is unclear; 'around 1000 to 1500' is more appropriate.

× most of the time I prefer to buy expensive shoes with good brand because it's good quality and comfortable and looking.

✓ Most of the time, I prefer to buy expensive shoes from good brands because they have good quality, are comfortable, and look good.

The sentence needs plural 'brands' to match 'shoes'. 'It's' should be 'they have' to refer to 'shoes'. The adjectives 'comfortable' and 'looking' need to be connected properly; 'look good' is the correct phrase.

× In my opinion I am prefer to comfortable shoes but some of time I also wearing fashionable shoes when I go at party and at marriage.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer comfortable shoes, but sometimes I also wear fashionable shoes when I go to parties and weddings.

The phrase 'I am prefer' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is correct. 'Some of time' should be 'sometimes'. 'I also wearing' should be 'I also wear'. The preposition 'at' is incorrect; 'to' is correct before 'parties' and 'weddings'.

× On that time I am prefer fashionable shoes but most of the time I wearing comfortable shoes in my daily routine.

✓ At that time, I prefer fashionable shoes, but most of the time I wear comfortable shoes in my daily routine.

'I am prefer' should be 'I prefer'. 'I wearing' should be 'I wear'. The preposition 'On that time' should be 'At that time'.