Shoes— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
I don't really enjoy buying shoes and clothing general, uh, I, I, I think I find it uh, a time consuming moment so I try to avoid it. I only buy one a pair of new shoes when my current pair is absolutely.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Yes, actually I tried to buy online when I have the necessity for for a new pair of shoes. I because I know the the size and I use the the same brand always. I, I know I, I have already know the the characteristic that I need. So I I use the the website.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
MMM this is a a good question. I think I spent more money than general people because I I try to to spend to buy a expensive pair of shoes over than a achieve ones because I try to use a for a couple of years.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
Definitely, I prefer comfortable shoes over the fashionable ones because uh, I, I always stay at home. I, I do, uh, homework and I, I training at, uh, in my home also. So I, I need a comfortable pair of shoes in order to.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta es un poco repetitiva y contiene pausas innecesarias que afectan la fluidez. Además, la frase final está incompleta y poco clara. Intenta ser más directo y claro, evitando repeticiones y completando tus ideas.
Ejemplo: I don't enjoy buying shoes very much because it takes a lot of time. Therefore, I only buy a new pair when my current ones are completely worn out.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta tiene muchas repeticiones y errores gramaticales que dificultan la comprensión. Además, falta coherencia en la estructura. Trata de usar oraciones más simples y claras, y evita repetir palabras innecesariamente.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online because I know my size and usually buy the same brand. This makes it easier to choose the right pair on the website.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta es confusa y contiene errores gramaticales y de vocabulario. Además, la idea no está bien expresada. Intenta organizar mejor tus ideas y usar vocabulario adecuado para expresar comparación y razones.
Ejemplo: I usually spend more money on shoes than most people because I prefer to buy expensive ones that last for several years.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta tiene muchas pausas y repeticiones que afectan la fluidez. Además, la última frase está incompleta. Intenta ser más conciso y claro, completando tus ideas y evitando muletillas.
Ejemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I usually stay at home doing homework and exercising, so comfort is more important to me than fashion.
Gramática
× I only buy one a pair of new shoes when my current pair is absolutely.
✓ I only buy a pair of new shoes when my current pair is absolutely worn out.
The phrase 'one a pair' is incorrect because 'pair' already implies two items, so 'one' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'worn out' completes the meaning.
× Yes, actually I tried to buy online when I have the necessity for for a new pair of shoes.
✓ Yes, actually I tried to buy online when I had the necessity for a new pair of shoes.
The verb tense should be consistent; 'tried' is past tense, so 'have' should be changed to past tense 'had' to maintain agreement.
× I think I spent more money than general people because I I try to to spend to buy a expensive pair of shoes over than a achieve ones because I try to use a for a couple of years.
✓ I think I spend more money than most people because I try to buy an expensive pair of shoes rather than cheaper ones because I try to use them for a couple of years.
The sentence has multiple issues: 'spent' should be present tense 'spend' to match the habitual action; 'general people' is incorrect, 'most people' is better; 'a expensive' should be 'an expensive' due to vowel sound; 'over than' is incorrect, 'rather than' is correct; 'achieve ones' is incorrect, 'cheaper ones' fits the context; 'use a for' is incorrect, 'use them for' is correct.
× I, I training at, uh, in my home also.
✓ I also train at home.
The verb 'training' is incorrectly used as a noun here; it should be the verb 'train'. Also, 'at, uh, in my home' is redundant; 'at home' is the correct prepositional phrase.
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