Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和发音不清晰的问题，建议练习正确的句子结构，例如使用简单的现在时态和复数形式，同时减少口头语和犹豫词。回答时应直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy about two pairs each year: one for sports and another to replace old shoes. This helps me feel comfortable.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，使回答更自然流畅。同时，注意发音和句子完整性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is convenient. However, I cannot try them before buying, so I have to return them if they don't fit.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不清晰，数字和价格描述混乱。建议练习清晰表达价格范围，避免重复和犹豫词，使用连贯的句子结构。

Ejemplo: I usually spend less than $200 on shoes. If there is no discount, the price can be around $300, but I prefer to buy them when they are on sale.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了个人偏好，但语法和句子结构需要改进。建议使用完整句子，避免口头语，并用连贯的表达说明原因。

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because my feet are quite big, similar to men's feet. Most women's shoes are uncomfortable for me, so I have to buy larger sizes.

× I don't lie buying shoe, umm uh, mostly I buy the shoes around UH-2 shoes per year, so one is for sport and another one is for the replace.

✓ I don't like buying shoes, umm uh, mostly I buy around 2 pairs of shoes per year, so one is for sport and another one is for replacement.

The student used 'lie' instead of 'like' which is a pronunciation error affecting word choice. Also, 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to more than one. 'The replace' is incorrect; it should be 'replacement' to correctly express the purpose of the second pair.

× I don't lie buying shoe, umm uh, mostly I buy the shoes around UH-2 shoes per year, so one is for sport and another one is for the replace.

✓ I don't like buying shoes, umm uh, mostly I buy around 2 pairs of shoes per year, so one is for sport and another one is for replacement.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because the student refers to multiple items. Also, 'around UH-2 shoes' is unclear; 'around 2 pairs of shoes' is more appropriate to express quantity.

× So that's make me feel comfortable.

✓ So that makes me feel comfortable.

The phrase 'that's make' is incorrect; it should be 'that makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. 'That's' is a contraction of 'that is' which does not fit here.

× I try to bought shoes online and it's the convenience, uh, however, so I buy it from online, I cannot try the site.

✓ I tried to buy shoes online and it's convenient, uh, however, when I buy online, I cannot try them on.

'Try to bought' is incorrect; 'tried to buy' is the correct past tense form. 'It's the convenience' should be 'it's convenient' to use the correct adjective. 'Buy it from online' should be 'buy online'. 'Try the site' is unclear; 'try them on' is the correct phrase for trying shoes.

× So I once I receive that, I have to try that.

✓ So once I receive them, I have to try them on.

'That' is singular and inappropriate for multiple shoes; 'them' is the correct plural pronoun. Also, 'try that' should be 'try them on' to express trying shoes.

× If not suitable, I need to refund it, uh, return.

✓ If they are not suitable, I need to return them for a refund.

'It' is singular but refers to multiple shoes; 'them' is correct. Also, 'refund it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'return them for a refund'.

× I try to bought shoes online and it's the convenience, uh, however, so I buy it from online, I cannot try the site.

✓ I tried to buy shoes online and it's convenient, uh, however, when I buy online, I cannot try them on.

The preposition 'from online' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'buy online' without 'from'.

× Uh, the shoes are mostly Spanish around uh, not more than the $200 umm mostly I think uh, the shoes if no discount is around 300 this number uh, if they have discount uh, I will try, try to buy it yes.

✓ Uh, the shoes are mostly priced around, uh, not more than $200. Umm, mostly I think, uh, if there is no discount, the shoes cost around $300. Uh, if they have a discount, uh, I will try to buy them, yes.

The original sentence has unclear quantifiers and structure. 'Spanish' is likely a mispronunciation or error. 'Not more than the $200' should be 'not more than $200'. 'If no discount is around 300 this number' is unclear; it should be 'if there is no discount, the shoes cost around $300'. 'Try to buy it' should be 'try to buy them' referring to shoes.

× Uh, the shoes are mostly Spanish around uh, not more than the $200 umm mostly I think uh, the shoes if no discount is around 300 this number uh, if they have discount uh, I will try, try to buy it yes.

✓ Uh, the shoes are mostly priced around, uh, not more than $200. Umm, mostly I think, uh, if there is no discount, the shoes cost around $300. Uh, if they have a discount, uh, I will try to buy them, yes.

'It' is singular but refers to multiple shoes; 'them' is correct.

× I prefer comfortable shoes 'cause my feet is quite big, just like a uh, men's feet, umm, mostly uh, the female shoes like is not comfortable for me, so I have to buy big size.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because my feet are quite big, just like men's feet. Umm, mostly, female shoes are not comfortable for me, so I have to buy a big size.

'Feet' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'The female shoes like is' is incorrect; it should be 'female shoes are'. Also, 'big size' should be preceded by an article 'a big size'.