Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your reasons more naturally and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying new shoes, especially on weekends when I go out. I like to wear different pairs and often share photos of them on social media, which motivates me to keep collecting.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your explanation more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it offers a wide range of options. Moreover, online stores usually have the latest styles, so for convenience and variety, I prefer shopping online.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid filler words, and explain your reasons more precisely with linking words.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about $100 a month on shoes because buying them is a hobby for me. I see it as an investment since I don't have to borrow shoes from friends, which makes it worthwhile.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use correct expressions. Also, explain your preference clearly with linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer a combination of both comfort and style. However, recently, I have bought mostly fashionable shoes like Air Jordans because I love how they look when paired with jeans.

× I collect shoes because I really like love to get out of my house on the weekend.

✓ I collect shoes because I really love to get out of my house on the weekend.

The phrase 'like love' is incorrect because two verbs are used consecutively without proper conjunction or separation. The correct form is to use only one verb that conveys the intended meaning. Here, 'love' alone suffices to express strong liking.

× Yes, I already buy it a lot of shoes online.

✓ Yes, I already buy a lot of shoes online.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used here as it does not refer to any specific noun in this context. The phrase should simply be 'buy a lot of shoes online' without 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to buy it online because I can select from different range and most of the time the latest articles are present on online stores.

✓ I prefer to buy online because I can select from a different range and most of the time the latest articles are available in online stores.

The preposition 'from different range' is missing an article and should be 'from a different range'. Also, 'present on online stores' is better expressed as 'available in online stores' to correctly indicate location.

× So that is the reason uh, because of convenience I order it online.

✓ So that is the reason, uh, because of convenience I order online.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and unclear here. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without 'it'.

× I usually spend around $100 every month on shoes because to me, uh, buying shoes is kind of hobby and I invest in the shoes because it's kind of investment for me and I have no, I, I not have to look longer for, to or to borrow it from my friend.

✓ I usually spend around $100 every month on shoes because, to me, uh, buying shoes is kind of a hobby and I invest in shoes because it's kind of an investment for me and I do not have to look longer for or borrow them from my friends.

Several pronoun and article errors: 'kind of hobby' needs an article 'a'; 'it's kind of investment' needs 'an'; 'I not have to' is incorrect, should be 'I do not have to'; 'borrow it' should be 'borrow them' to agree with plural 'shoes'; 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to generalize borrowing.

× I prefer combination of both, but uh, in my latest collection, I ordered most of them that are fashionable like Air Jordans because I really, uh, love them, uh, wedding with the jeans.

✓ I prefer a combination of both, but uh, in my latest collection, I ordered most of them that are fashionable like Air Jordans because I really, uh, love them, uh, wearing with jeans.

The phrase 'prefer combination of both' needs the article 'a' before 'combination'. Also, 'wedding with the jeans' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'wearing' and 'jeans' does not need 'the'.