Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'you know' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct grammar such as 'pairs' instead of 'pair' when talking about multiple items. Provide a clear topic sentence and then add specific details to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but not very often. For example, last year I bought about four pairs, mostly for different occasions.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating words and use more formal linking words instead of informal contractions like 'cause'. Also, use the correct tense and structure for clarity. Add a topic sentence and then support it with reasons using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because it is more convenient and there are often better discounts available.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and direct, but you can improve by adding a topic sentence and giving more context or reasons. This will make your answer more complete and natural.

Ejemplo: I usually spend around 300 reals on a pair of shoes because I prefer good quality and durability.

Sugerencia: Use the correct tense, 'prefer' instead of 'preferred'. Start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes, especially because I work as a nurse and need to be on my feet for long hours.

× Like uh, you know one year I had like 4 pair of shoes.

✓ Like uh, you know one year I had like 4 pairs of shoes.

The word 'pair' should be pluralized to 'pairs' when referring to more than one. Since the sentence mentions '4', which is plural, the noun must agree in number.

× Yes, I always bought buy shoes online 'cause it's more convenient and we have more discounts.

✓ Yes, I always buy shoes online 'cause it's more convenient and we have more discounts.

The adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'buy' instead of the past tense 'bought'. Using 'bought' here is incorrect because it conflicts with the habitual aspect.

× I preferred comfortable shoes, specially in my work as a nurse.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes, especially in my work as a nurse.

The question is about current preference, so the present tense 'prefer' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'preferred'. Also, 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis.