Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to improve your answer by correcting grammar mistakes and using more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, use 'worn out' instead of 'war and torn' and avoid repeating 'shoes' unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I don't buy shoes very often because I usually wear the same pair for many years. However, when my shoes are really worn out, I prefer to buy new ones that are comfortable.

Sugerencia: Focus on improving sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct vocabulary errors such as 'shows' instead of 'shoes' and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online a couple of times. Sometimes the size and colour are fine, but other times I don't like them, so I have to return the shoes and buy them in a physical store instead.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by using clearer sentence structures and avoiding repetition. Also, replace 'show' with 'shoes' and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I usually try to spend no more than $50 on shoes because I prefer affordable options. However, I always make sure that the shoes I buy are comfortable and durable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting minor grammar mistakes and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and replace 'show' with 'shoes'.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I work as a registered nurse in long-term care, where I have to stand for 12 hours. Therefore, comfort and durability are more important to me than fashion.

× I used to wear the shoes which I have for many years.

✓ I used to wear the shoes which I have had for many years.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have had' to indicate possession over a period of time. Also, 'used to wear' suggests past habit, so 'have had' fits better to show the shoes have been owned for many years.

× If my show is really war and torn, I'd like to purchase new one, but if not, I try to wear the shoes if it's comfortable for me.

✓ If my shoe is really worn and torn, I'd like to purchase a new one, but if not, I try to wear the shoes if they're comfortable for me.

The word 'show' is a typo and should be 'shoe'. 'War' should be 'worn'. 'New one' needs the article 'a'. 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'shoes'.

× Yes, I bought shows couple of times through online purchase.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes a couple of times through online purchase.

'Shows' is a typo and should be 'shoes'. Also, 'couple of times' requires the article 'a' before 'couple'.

× Yes, I bought shows couple of times through online purchase.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes a couple of times through online purchases.

The phrase 'through online purchase' is awkward; 'through online purchases' or 'by online purchase' is more natural. Plural 'purchases' fits better here.

× Uh, sometimes it will become OK according to the size and the colour, but sometimes I don't like but I have to return it back to and I have to go to the store and physically see and buy.

✓ Uh, sometimes it will be okay according to the size and the colour, but sometimes I don't like it and have to return it, so I have to go to the store to physically see and buy.

The sentence is run-on and awkward. 'Become OK' is better as 'be okay'. 'Return it back to' is redundant; 'return it' suffices. The conjunctions and sentence flow need correction for clarity.

× Well, I tried to spend maximum $50, uh, for the show, I don't like to purchase more amount.

✓ Well, I try to spend a maximum of $50, uh, for the shoes; I don't like to spend more than that.

'Tried' should be 'try' to match habitual action. 'Show' is a typo for 'shoes'. 'More amount' is incorrect; 'more than that' or 'a higher amount' is better.

× Well, I tried to spend maximum $50, uh, for the show, I don't like to purchase more amount.

✓ Well, I try to spend a maximum of $50, uh, for the shoes; I don't like to spend more than that.

The phrase 'spend maximum $50' is incorrect; it should be 'spend a maximum of $50'.

× I don't like to spend more amount to purchase shoes and whatever I buy, I make sure it is comfortable, durable to wear.

✓ I don't like to spend a larger amount to purchase shoes, and whatever I buy, I make sure it is comfortable and durable to wear.

'More amount' is incorrect; 'a larger amount' or 'more money' is correct. Also, 'comfortable, durable to wear' needs 'and' to connect adjectives properly.

× Definitely, I prefer comfortable shoes because I work as a registered nurse in a long term care and I have to stand for 12 hours in my job.

✓ Definitely, I prefer comfortable shoes because I work as a registered nurse in long-term care and I have to stand for 12 hours in my job.

'A long term care' is incorrect; 'long-term care' is a compound adjective and does not need 'a'.

× So I definitely prefer a comfortable show rather than a fashionable show which is more durable for me.

✓ So I definitely prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes which are more durable for me.

'Show' is a typo for 'shoe' and should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'shoes'.