Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by correcting minor errors and avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Also, complete your sentences fully to avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear, concise response within five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help me express my personal style. I usually purchase new shoes every few months, especially during sales or when I need specific types for work or casual occasions. For instance, I recently bought a pair of running shoes to stay comfortable during exercise.

Sugerencia: Your answer is brief and could be expanded with more details and linking words to make it more natural and effective. Also, correct the grammar by saying 'which are of the Adidas brand' or 'Adidas sneakers'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. Recently, I purchased a pair of Adidas sneakers because they offer great comfort and style.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear parts and minor grammar mistakes. For example, 'when my old ones were torn out' should be 'when my old ones are worn out'. Also, the phrase 'when they get torn or comfortable' is confusing. Try to clarify your points and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I only buy new ones when my old ones are worn out. Additionally, I sometimes purchase shoes for special occasions. Therefore, I try to keep my spending low most of the time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and well-structured with relevant supporting details. To improve further, you could add a linking phrase to connect your opinion and example more smoothly, and perhaps include a brief comparison to fashionable shoes.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I value practicality and foot health. For example, when I have to walk or stand for long periods, comfortable shoes help prevent pain and fatigue, unlike fashionable shoes which can sometimes be uncomfortable.

× Yes, I love buying shoes quite a lot because they allow me to express by personal style.

✓ Yes, I love buying shoes quite a lot because they allow me to express my personal style.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used here. The correct phrase is 'express my personal style' without 'by'. 'Express' is a transitive verb and should be followed directly by the object.

× For example, I recently purchased a pair of running shoes to stay comfortable during my.

✓ For example, I recently purchased a pair of running shoes to stay comfortable during my runs.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It needs a noun after 'my' to complete the meaning. Adding 'runs' completes the sentence logically.

× Recently I have bought sneakers which is of Adidas brand.

✓ Recently I have bought sneakers which are of the Adidas brand.

The subject 'sneakers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'of Adidas brand' is better expressed as 'of the Adidas brand' to include the definite article.

× I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I only buy new ones when my old ones were torn out, for example.

✓ I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I only buy new ones when my old ones are worn out, for example.

'Torn out' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'worn out' to describe shoes that are no longer usable due to wear.

× I replace them when they get torn or comfortable.

✓ I replace them when they get torn or uncomfortable.

The word 'comfortable' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is that the shoes become uncomfortable, so 'uncomfortable' should be used.