Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoid filler words like 'you know', and use more precise vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I am passionate about fashion and design. I usually buy new shoes every two weeks, which makes me feel confident and stylish.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, explain your reasons more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and saves time. Additionally, I find it enjoyable to browse different styles from home, especially when I feel too tired to visit physical stores.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with specific details. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

Ejemplo: I usually spend between 50 and 100 KD on shoes, depending on the season and my needs. I believe it's important to update my footwear regularly to stay fashionable and enjoy variety.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations and unclear expressions. Try to answer directly, use linking words to explain your preferences, and avoid repetition. Use clear vocabulary to express your ideas.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer fashionable shoes because I enjoy expressing my style, but other times I choose comfortable shoes, especially when I plan to walk a lot or stay close to home.

× I love designing and shoes, which has something, it's belong to the fashion.

✓ I love designing and shoes, which have something, they belong to fashion.

The verb 'has' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so it should be 'have'. Also, 'it's belong' is incorrect; the correct form is 'they belong' to match the plural subject 'shoes'.

× I didn't feel dull when I buy it.

✓ I don't feel dull when I buy it.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense is appropriate. 'Didn't feel' is past tense and inconsistent with 'when I buy'. Changing to 'don't feel' corrects the tense agreement.

× So maybe in two weeks.

✓ So maybe every two weeks.

The phrase 'in two weeks' suggests a single future time, but the context implies frequency. 'Every two weeks' correctly expresses the habitual action.

× I buy shoes in an online website because I feel it's easy

✓ I buy shoes on an online website because I feel it's easy

The correct preposition for websites is 'on', not 'in'. 'On an online website' is the standard usage.

× sometime I'm I'm kind, I'm kind of person that sometimes they feel lazy to go and buy in the in the real shop.

✓ Sometimes I'm kind of a person who feels lazy to go and buy in a real shop.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I'm kind of person' needs an article 'a'. 'That sometimes they feel' is incorrect; 'who feels' agrees with singular 'person'. Also, 'in the in the real shop' is redundant; 'in a real shop' is correct.

× So I prefer the online shop because it is also fun and it's feel like crucial.

✓ So I prefer the online shop because it is also fun and it feels crucial.

'It's feel' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'it feels' is correct. Also, 'like crucial' is awkward; 'crucial' is an adjective and should be used appropriately.

× Between 50 KD to 100 KD, it's bent in the season and it depends what I need in this time.

✓ Between 50 KD and 100 KD, it depends on the season and what I need at this time.

The correct preposition with 'between' is 'and', not 'to'. 'Bent in the season' is incorrect; 'depends on the season' is correct. 'Depends what I need in this time' should be 'depends on what I need at this time'.

× So and you know it is crucial to buy every season and you choose to have fun and you feel something not dull something.

✓ So, you know, it is crucial to buy every season, and you choose to have fun and feel something, not something dull.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. Adding commas improves clarity. 'You feel something not dull something' is corrected to 'feel something, not something dull' for better meaning.

× It's the band in the what what my moods choose.

✓ It depends on what my mood chooses.

'It's the band in the what what my moods choose' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'It depends on what my mood chooses' to express preference based on mood.

× some think my self or characteristic in my characteristic love fashion and love to be wealthy and sometime I love to be cozy and I feel comfortable when I go to anywhere.

✓ Sometimes I think my personality or characteristics love fashion and love to be wealthy, and sometimes I love to be cozy and feel comfortable when I go anywhere.

'Some think my self' should be 'Sometimes I think myself' or better 'Sometimes I think my personality'. 'Characteristic in my characteristic' is incorrect; 'personality or characteristics' is better. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Go to anywhere' should be 'go anywhere'.

× It's near the near in my house, so it's the best.

✓ It's near my house, so it's the best.

'Near the near in my house' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'near my house'.