Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and irrelevant phrases. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, specify how often you buy shoes, and explain why in a coherent and natural way using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually do so about twice a month. I enjoy it because it helps me keep up with the latest fashion trends. Moreover, shopping for shoes is a fun experience that allows me to express my personal style.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use clear linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' correctly, and improve sentence structure for naturalness and clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online. Firstly, online stores usually offer discounts, which makes the shoes cheaper than in physical shops. Secondly, there is a wider variety of choices available online, so I can find exactly what I want.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear amount and explain your spending habits with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

Ejemplo: I usually spend between 100 and 200 Chinese Yuan on shoes. I don't pay too much attention to brands or styles, so I prefer to buy affordable shoes that meet my basic needs.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your preference but is unclear and contains errors. Clearly state your preference and reasons using correct grammar and linking words to make your answer natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones. Although fashionable shoes look nice, they can sometimes be harmful to my feet. Therefore, I choose comfort over style to protect my foot health.

× Our e-mail she's Laura, you know, so I'm fascinated his boy.

✓ Our e-mail is Laura, you know, so I'm fascinated by her.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'she's' and 'his boy' which do not fit the context. 'She's' should be 'is' to indicate the email belongs to Laura, and 'his boy' is incorrect; it should be 'by her' to express fascination with Laura.

× She's a twice a week, maybe it's twice a month.

✓ She buys shoes twice a week, maybe twice a month.

The phrase 'She's a twice a week' is incorrect because 'twice a week' is an adverbial phrase and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'it's twice a month' is unclear; it should be 'maybe twice a month' to indicate frequency.

× I think it's essential way to keep up our new trends over the societies.

✓ I think it's an essential way to keep up with new trends in society.

The sentence lacks the article 'an' before 'essential way' and misuses 'over the societies'. The correct preposition is 'with' after 'keep up', and 'society' should be singular and without 'the' in this context.

× What's more, when buying shoes, I will leave my suggest and make me enjoy.

✓ What's more, when buying shoes, I will leave my suggestions and enjoy myself.

The phrase 'leave my suggest' is incorrect; it should be 'leave my suggestions'. Also, 'make me enjoy' is awkward; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' is needed to indicate the subject enjoys the action.

× Well, I like to buy in shoes online.

✓ Well, I like to buy shoes online.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'buy shoes online' without 'in'.

× Firstly, it often has some discount price which made me much cheaper than a shopping on the supermarket.

✓ Firstly, it often has discounted prices which make it much cheaper than shopping at the supermarket.

'Some discount price' is incorrect; 'discounted prices' is appropriate. 'Made me much cheaper' is wrong; the subject should be 'it' (the website), and 'shopping on the supermarket' should be 'shopping at the supermarket'.

× Secondly, when I bought there are numerous choice for me.

✓ Secondly, when I buy there, there are numerous choices for me.

The sentence mixes tenses and lacks proper structure. 'When I bought' should be 'when I buy' to match present tense, and 'numerous choice' should be plural 'numerous choices'.

× Maybe between 100 and CN¥200.

✓ Maybe between CN¥100 and CN¥200.

The currency symbol should precede the amount consistently. Also, the original sentence lacks the currency symbol before 100.

× You know, I don't have much pursuit or what I'm wearing shoe, so I have little monies.

✓ You know, I don't have much preference for what shoes I wear, so I have little money.

'Much pursuit' is incorrect; 'preference' fits better. 'What I'm wearing shoe' is ungrammatical; it should be 'what shoes I wear'. 'Monies' is a formal plural rarely used; 'money' is appropriate here.

× I spend little money on that.

✓ I spend little money on shoes.

The phrase 'on that' is vague; specifying 'on shoes' clarifies the meaning.

× Instead of enjoy fashionable shoes, I prefer like 2 comfortable shoes.

✓ Instead of enjoying fashionable shoes, I prefer comfortable shoes.

'Instead of enjoy' should be 'Instead of enjoying' to use the gerund after 'instead of'. 'Prefer like 2 comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'prefer comfortable shoes' is correct and clearer.

× I think sometimes fashionable shoes can have a bad effect or maybe harmful for my food, so I prefer like to comfortable shoes to.

✓ I think sometimes fashionable shoes can have a bad effect or may be harmful to my feet, so I prefer comfortable shoes too.

'Harmful for my food' is a typo; it should be 'harmful to my feet'. 'Prefer like to comfortable shoes to' is ungrammatical; it should be 'prefer comfortable shoes too'.