Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Honestly, no, there's not any special rules because that today we live in modern, uh, the world, so everything is usually not special.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
I don't know this question. Umm, may you umm, tell me precisely?
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yes I do and there are many such a person in my life now and I cannot choose anyone because they were very good in their job.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'uh', and provide specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer coherent.
Ejemplo: No, there are not many strict rules at my school because we live in a modern society where students are trusted to behave responsibly. For example, we are encouraged to manage our own time and respect others without many restrictions.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: Avoid asking the examiner to repeat or clarify the question. Instead, try to answer based on your understanding, even if you are unsure. Use simple sentences to express your opinion and support it with reasons or examples.
Ejemplo: I think having some rules can help students stay focused and disciplined. For instance, rules about homework deadlines encourage us to complete tasks on time.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific details or examples about one teacher to make your answer more effective.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have several teachers who do their jobs very well. For example, my math teacher explains difficult concepts clearly and is always patient when students ask questions.
× Honestly, no, there's not any special rules because that today we live in modern, uh, the world, so everything is usually not special.
✓ Honestly, no, there aren't any special rules because today we live in a modern world, so everything is usually not special.
The phrase 'there's not any special rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and requires the plural form 'there aren't' instead of 'there's'. Also, 'that today' is unnecessary and 'the world' should be preceded by 'a' to indicate 'a modern world'. To improve, use 'there aren't any special rules' and 'a modern world'.
× Yes I do and there are many such a person in my life now and I cannot choose anyone because they were very good in their job.
✓ Yes, I do, and there are many such people in my life now, and I cannot choose anyone because they are very good at their job.
The phrase 'many such a person' is incorrect because 'a person' is singular and cannot be used with 'many'. The correct plural form is 'many such people'. Also, 'they were' should be 'they are' to maintain present tense, and 'good in their job' should be 'good at their job'. To improve, use 'many such people' and 'they are very good at their job'.