Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yeah, there are so many rules in our school, especially if a student bring some politics back, it will. Want to drop to our school dustbin and also it is a.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
(sin respuesta)
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yeah, I have a teacher who does his job very well. She's my school school teacher. She do her job very well and also she always supportive for us and always spend time with us.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects the natural flow and effectiveness. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific examples of rules. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, mention a few important rules and explain briefly why they exist.
Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to bring political materials because it can cause conflicts. Also, wearing the school uniform properly is mandatory to maintain discipline.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 0.0Sugerencia: You did not provide an answer to this question. Remember to always respond directly with a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Keep your answer natural and concise, using linking words if you add supporting details.
Ejemplo: I believe that having more rules can help students stay focused and behave better. However, too many rules might make students feel restricted, so there should be a balance.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some repetition. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same phrases. Add linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of how the teacher supports students.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is very supportive and always spends extra time helping us with difficult topics. Because of her dedication, many students feel more confident in their studies.
× Yeah, there are so many rules in our school, especially if a student bring some politics back, it will. Want to drop to our school dustbin and also it is a.
✓ Yeah, there are so many rules in our school, especially if a student brings some politics back, it will want to drop it in our school dustbin and also it is a...
The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'a student'. This is a singular and plural issue. In English (Sri Lanka), we must ensure the verb agrees with the subject in number to maintain correct grammar.
× She do her job very well and also she always supportive for us and always spend time with us.
✓ She does her job very well and also she is always supportive of us and always spends time with us.
The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the third person singular subject 'She'. Also, 'supportive for us' should be 'supportive of us', and 'spend' should be 'spends' to match the subject. These are third person singular issues and preposition usage errors. In English (Sri Lanka), verbs must agree with the subject and correct prepositions must be used for clarity.