Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say "Students must wear school uniforms to maintain equality and discipline. Additionally, mobile phones are banned to minimize distractions in class."

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. Students must wear school uniforms to maintain equality and discipline. Additionally, mobile phones are banned to minimize distractions in class.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points. For example, "Yes, I believe students benefit from having rules because they help guide them on the right path to success."

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students benefit from having rules because they help guide them on the right path to success in their lives.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows positive feelings but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, my English teacher is very kind-hearted and always helps students. Moreover, he motivates us to accept challenges and succeed in life."

Ejemplo: Yes, my English teacher is very kind-hearted and always helps students. Moreover, he motivates us to accept challenges and succeed in life.

× Yes, there are number of rules for students in my school.

✓ Yes, there are a number of rules for students in my school.

The phrase 'number of rules' requires the article 'a' before 'number' to be grammatically correct. Without 'a', the sentence is incomplete and incorrect.

× The most important rule is that that student must be a school uniform to maintain equality and discipline.

✓ The most important rule is that students must wear a school uniform to maintain equality and discipline.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'be a school uniform' instead of 'wear a school uniform'. Also, 'that student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. The verb 'wear' is the correct verb to use with clothing.

× Mobile phones are banned for minimize their distraction in the class.

✓ Mobile phones are banned to minimize their distraction in the class.

The phrase 'for minimize' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form 'to minimize' should be used after 'are banned' to express purpose.

× Yes, I think students are more benefit from rules because with the rules they can.

✓ Yes, I think students benefit more from rules because with the rules they can.

The phrase 'are more benefit' is incorrect. 'Benefit' is a verb here and should not be preceded by 'are'. The correct form is 'students benefit more'.

× Follow up proper track to be a successful in their life.

✓ They can follow the proper track to be successful in their lives.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Also, 'a successful' is incorrect; 'successful' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Lives' should be plural to match 'their'.

× Yes, my English teacher is A1 of person who is a very kind hearted.

✓ Yes, my English teacher is an A1 person who is very kind-hearted.

The article 'an' should be used before 'A1' because it starts with a vowel sound. 'Kind hearted' should be hyphenated as 'kind-hearted' as it is a compound adjective.

× His motivates us to be a successful person in our lives, to accept big challenges in my life.

✓ He motivates us to be successful people in our lives and to accept big challenges in life.

'His' is incorrect here; the subject pronoun 'He' should be used. Also, 'a successful person' should be plural 'successful people' to match 'us'. The phrase 'in my life' is inconsistent with 'our lives' and should be generalized to 'in life'.