Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yes, there are many rules in my school. For example, when we have dinner we cannot waste food and when we stay at our classroom we cannot talk aloud when we have class and we still need stand straight.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
Yes, I think students would be benefit more from more roles. The reason is first they are a developing development people. They should know more rules so they can follow. The second is they can not.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yes, he's a very good teacher during our class, he's very strict with us and can teach us, can teach us very pretty and.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议注意句子结构,避免冗长且不连贯的句子。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅,同时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。
Ejemplo: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we are not allowed to waste food during meals. Also, we must remain quiet and stand straight when we are in the classroom during lessons.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱,存在语法错误和词汇使用错误。建议明确表达观点,使用完整句子,并提供具体理由支持观点。
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. Firstly, as young people, they need clear guidelines to develop good habits. Secondly, rules help maintain order and create a better learning environment.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,存在重复和语法错误。建议用完整句子描述老师的特点,避免重复,并使用恰当的形容词和连接词。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is strict but fair, and he explains the lessons clearly, which helps us understand the material better.
× when we stay at our classroom we cannot talk aloud when we have class and we still need stand straight.
✓ when we stay in our classroom we cannot talk aloud when we have class and we still need to stand straight.
动词后面缺少不定式to,正确用法是need to stand,表示需要做某事。
× when we stay at our classroom we cannot talk aloud when we have class and we still need stand straight.
✓ when we stay in our classroom we cannot talk aloud when we have class and we still need to stand straight.
介词使用错误,表示在教室内应使用in而不是at。
× I think students would be benefit more from more roles.
✓ I think students would benefit more from more rules.
would后面应接动词原形benefit,而不是be benefit。
× I think students would be benefit more from more roles.
✓ I think students would benefit more from more rules.
roles应为rules,表示规则,roles意思是角色,词义错误。
× The reason is first they are a developing development people.
✓ The reason is, first, they are developing people.
句子结构混乱,development是名词,developing是形容词,且people前不加a。
× They should know more rules so they can follow.
✓ They should know more rules so they can follow them.
follow是及物动词,后面应加宾语them。
× The second is they can not.
✓ The second is they cannot.
句子不完整,cannot后应有内容,推测为cannot do something,此处简化为cannot。
× Yes, he's a very good teacher during our class, he's very strict with us and can teach us, can teach us very pretty and.
✓ Yes, he's a very good teacher during our class. He's very strict with us and can teach us very well.
代词使用不当,重复且句子不完整,pretty用错,应使用副词well修饰teach。