Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question by stating the rules clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary details and grammatical errors. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must get permission from their teacher before leaving the classroom, such as to drink water. Moreover, our principal is very strict about following these rules to maintain discipline.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and repetition. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using simple and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer logical.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because rules help build discipline. For instance, when students follow rules strictly, they learn to be responsible and focused in their studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question by naming the teacher and explaining why you think he does his job well. Use clear sentences and relevant vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a teacher named Jagjit Sir who does his job very well. He is very disciplined and organised, probably because his father is in the police. He teaches English clearly and helps students understand the lessons completely.

× There was a man who was in my Academy.

✓ There is a man who is in my Academy.

The sentence refers to a current situation, so the verb 'was' should be in the present tense 'is' to match the time frame. 'There be' issue refers to incorrect use of 'there is/are' forms.

× One of the rule is when anybody or any learner are going to train, what they have got, first of all they have got our permission from our teacher, then they go to drink water and my principal are very strict in my school.

✓ One of the rules is when anybody or any learner is going to train, first of all they have to get permission from our teacher, then they go to drink water, and my principal is very strict in my school.

The phrase 'One of the rule' should be 'One of the rules' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. 'Anybody or any learner are' should be 'is' because 'anybody' and 'any learner' are singular. 'My principal are' should be 'my principal is' because 'principal' is singular. These are singular and plural agreement issues.

× One of the rule is when anybody or any learner are going to train, what they have got, first of all they have got our permission from our teacher, then they go to drink water and my principal are very strict in my school.

✓ One of the rules is when anybody or any learner is going to train, first of all they must get permission from our teacher, then they go to drink water, and my principal is very strict in my school.

The phrase 'they have got our permission' is better expressed as 'they must get permission' to indicate obligation. Modal verb 'must' is appropriate here to express necessity.

× my principal are very strict in my school.

✓ my principal is very strict in my school.

'Principal' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Yes, I think that is right because when a learner is fully built by the wooden regulations, they got discipline.

✓ Yes, I think that is right because when a learner is fully guided by the written regulations, they gain discipline.

The phrase 'fully built by the wooden regulations' is incorrect. It should be 'fully guided by the written regulations'. 'Wooden' is an incorrect adjective here, and 'built' is not appropriate. Also, 'got discipline' should be 'gain discipline' for correct verb usage.

× So they also hold very, very, very from rural regulations.

✓ So they also hold very firmly to the rules.

The original sentence is unclear and contains plural issues. 'Rural regulations' seems incorrect; likely intended 'rules'. 'Hold very, very, very' is incorrect usage. Corrected to 'hold very firmly to the rules' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, there was in my Academy Sir, namely Jagjit Sir and their father are also very displayed because of they are in police and as well as very district planned and very well because he's a English teacher and complete.

✓ Yes, there is a teacher in my Academy, namely Jagjit Sir, and his father is also very respected because he is in the police. He is very disciplined and very good because he is an English teacher and complete.

'There was' should be 'there is' to indicate present tense. 'Their father are' should be 'his father is' for singular agreement and correct pronoun. 'Displayed' is incorrect adjective; likely meant 'respected'. 'District planned' is unclear; corrected to 'disciplined'. 'He's a English teacher' should be 'he is an English teacher' with correct article usage. These are issues of 'there be', singular/plural, pronouns, adjectives, and article errors.