Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, mention one or two important rules clearly and explain why they exist.

Ejemplo: Yes, there were several rules at my school. For instance, students had to ask the teacher's permission before going to drink water, which helped maintain discipline in the classroom.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear opinion, then explain your reasons using linking words. Use specific examples or effects of rules on students' behavior and health.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because discipline helps improve their behavior. Moreover, following rules can promote better physical health by encouraging good habits.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details about the teacher's qualities or teaching methods, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had an English teacher at my academy who performed her duties very well. She explained lessons clearly and was more effective compared to other teachers, which helped me improve my language skills.

× I guess there were many rules in my school. One of the rule is that when anybody or learn going to drink water is firstly permission from the teacher and they then they would go to drink the water.

✓ I guess there were many rules in my school. One of the rules is that when anybody wants to go to drink water, they must first get permission from the teacher, and then they can go to drink the water.

The phrase 'One of the rule' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun, so it should be 'one of the rules'. Also, 'learn going to drink water' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'wants to go to drink water'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× One of the rule is that when anybody or learn going to drink water is firstly permission from the teacher and they then they would go to drink the water.

✓ One of the rules is that when anybody wants to go to drink water, they must first get permission from the teacher, and then they can go to drink the water.

The conjunction 'and they then they would go' is redundant and awkward. It should be simplified to 'and then they can go' for better flow and correctness.

× One of the rule is that when anybody or learn going to drink water is firstly permission from the teacher and they then they would go to drink the water.

✓ One of the rules is that when anybody wants to go to drink water, they must first get permission from the teacher, and then they can go to drink the water.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here. Since the rule is a general statement, 'can' or 'may' is more appropriate to express permission.

× Yes, I think that is right because a man is treated with a fully disciplined and rules, they are also got many benefits in their behavior and physical conditions also.

✓ Yes, I think that is right because a man who is treated with full discipline and rules also gets many benefits in their behavior and physical condition.

The phrase 'a fully disciplined and rules' is incorrect; 'fully disciplined' is an adjective phrase and 'rules' is plural noun. It should be 'full discipline and rules'. Also, 'they are also got' is incorrect; it should be 'also gets' to agree with singular subject 'a man'.

× Yes, I think that is right because a man is treated with a fully disciplined and rules, they are also got many benefits in their behavior and physical conditions also.

✓ Yes, I think that is right because a man who is treated with full discipline and rules also gets many benefits in his behavior and physical condition.

The pronoun 'they' does not agree with the singular noun 'a man'. It should be 'he' or 'his' to maintain agreement.

× Yes, in my Academy there was a one of the teacher of English subject, namely complete their duty very well as their work and they also teach very well comparing to other teachers.

✓ Yes, in my academy there was one of the English subject teachers who completed their duty very well and taught very well compared to other teachers.

The phrase 'a one of the teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the teachers' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'namely complete' is incorrect; it should be 'who completed'. The verb tenses are adjusted to past tense to match 'was'.

× Yes, in my Academy there was a one of the teacher of English subject, namely complete their duty very well as their work and they also teach very well comparing to other teachers.

✓ Yes, in my academy there was one of the English subject teachers who completed their duty very well and taught very well compared to other teachers.

The verbs 'complete' and 'teach' should be in past tense 'completed' and 'taught' to agree with the past tense context indicated by 'was'.

× Yes, in my Academy there was a one of the teacher of English subject, namely complete their duty very well as their work and they also teach very well comparing to other teachers.

✓ Yes, in my academy there was one of the English subject teachers who completed their duty very well and taught very well compared to other teachers.

The phrase 'comparing to other teachers' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'compared to other teachers'.