Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "Yet" ở đầu câu và nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về các quy tắc để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, at my school, there are several compulsory rules that students must follow, such as wearing uniforms and arriving on time.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "more good impact". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I have mixed feelings about this. On one hand, students might resist strict rules, but on the other hand, well-designed rules can help them develop discipline and responsibility.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít trong câu, ví dụ "teachers" nên là "teacher". Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động và thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, my English teacher is very dedicated. She is passionate and always encourages us to improve our speaking and writing skills.

× Yet in my school there are a few compulsory rules for students that they need to follow.

✓ In my school, there are a few compulsory rules for students that they need to follow.

The word 'Yet' is incorrectly used at the beginning of the sentence. 'Yet' is a conjunction or adverb used to indicate contrast or something unexpected, but here it is unnecessary and causes confusion. The sentence should start directly with 'In my school' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× I have two stances about these questions.

✓ I have two stances on these questions.

The preposition 'about' is less appropriate here; 'stances on' is the correct collocation when expressing opinions or positions regarding a topic. Using the correct preposition improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Firstly, I think that students nowadays won't love obeying such a compulsory and realistic rule and secondly, I think that students could get more good impact depends on the rules.

✓ Firstly, I think that students nowadays won't like obeying such compulsory and realistic rules, and secondly, I think that students could get a better impact depending on the rules.

Several issues here: 'won't love' is unnatural; 'won't like' is more appropriate. 'Such a compulsory and realistic rule' should be plural 'rules' to match context. 'More good impact' is incorrect; 'a better impact' is correct. 'Depends on' should be 'depending on' to fit the sentence structure. Also, a comma is needed before 'and secondly' to separate clauses.

× She is a passionate and ambitious teachers and she teaches us very well.

✓ She is a passionate and ambitious teacher, and she teaches us very well.

The subject 'She' is singular, so the noun 'teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to agree in number. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.