Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlatım bozuklukları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha açık ve net yapmak için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to chat during lessons. Also, if someone is caught cheating, the whole class might face consequences.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha doğal hale getirmek için bazı ifadeleri sadeleştirebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because when there are too many restrictions, they tend to break them. This happens because people often want to do what is forbidden.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda anlam bütünlüğü ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Cümlenizi tamamlamalı ve daha açık, mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsız ifadeleri kaldırmalısınız.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had an excellent teacher in elementary school who loved his job. Even though we had about 40 students in the class, he managed to teach us very well and made learning enjoyable.

× Yeah, the rule in my school is we are not allowed to chatting at any kinds and if we if they caught us cheating then it might be a trouble for all of our class.

✓ Yeah, the rule in my school is we are not allowed to chat of any kind and if they catch us cheating then it might be trouble for the whole class.

The phrase 'allowed to chatting' is incorrect because after 'allowed to' we should use the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'any kinds' should be 'any kind' as 'kind' is uncountable in this context. 'If they caught us' should be 'if they catch us' to maintain the present tense in a conditional sentence. 'A trouble' is incorrect; 'trouble' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'All of our class' is better expressed as 'the whole class' for clarity.

× I don't think they benefit from more rules because the more we give them rules and policies, the more they want to cheat the rules because we all like what is forbidden.

✓ I don't think they would benefit from more rules because the more rules and policies we give them, the more they want to cheat because we all like what is forbidden.

The modal verb 'would' is needed to express hypothetical or conditional situations properly. 'Benefit' should be preceded by 'would' to indicate this. Also, 'cheat the rules' is better as 'cheat' without 'the rules' or 'break the rules'. The sentence structure is improved by rearranging 'the more rules and policies we give them' for clarity.

× Yeah, I had a teacher that lost his job because because of he loves his job.

✓ Yeah, I had a teacher who lost his job even though he loved his job.

The phrase 'because because of he loves his job' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. 'Because of' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a clause. Also, 'he loves' should be in past tense 'he loved' to match the past context. Using 'even though' better expresses the contrast intended.

× He was very good at it.

✓ He was very good at it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× He was my elementary school teacher and we were like 40 students in the class and he.

✓ He was my elementary school teacher, and we were about 40 students in the class.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and he.' The corrected sentence removes the incomplete part and uses 'about' instead of 'like' for a more formal approximation. Also, a comma is added before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.