Rules— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yes, actually there are many rules in my school. The rule that I can remember are donated in the area which is not a bin. Don't talk or chat loudly in classroom or don't run in the hallway which I feel is very good rules.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
I think both yes and no. The reason why I don't agree with this statement because I think more rules makes student become more stressed and I think some rules is not that important.
Examinador
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Candidato
Yes, most teachers who taught me are very dedicated. They always prepare for the materials and what they will teach in the class beforehand.
Examinador
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Candidato
Personally, I think I prefer fewer rules to more rules because I think currently some of rules in my schools are quite illogical and too strict.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำผิดและคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'donated' ควรเป็น 'do not litter' และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล
Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to litter in areas that are not bins. Also, we must not talk loudly in the classroom or run in the hallways. I think these rules help maintain order and a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I think both yes and no' ควรเปลี่ยนเป็น 'I have mixed feelings about this'. นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลและเพิ่มรายละเอียดให้ชัดเจน
Ejemplo: I have mixed feelings about this. On one hand, more rules can help students behave better. However, too many rules might make students feel stressed, especially if some rules are unnecessary.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: คำตอบดีแล้วแต่ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดและใช้ linking words เพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น เช่น 'For example' หรือ 'In addition'
Ejemplo: Yes, most of my teachers have been very dedicated. For example, they always prepare the materials and plan their lessons carefully before class. In addition, they are willing to help students outside of class time.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น 'I think' ควรใช้ once และเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลให้ชัดเจน
Ejemplo: Personally, I prefer fewer rules rather than more because some of the current rules at my school seem illogical and too strict. Therefore, having fewer rules would make the school environment more comfortable for students.
Gramática
× The rule that I can remember are donated in the area which is not a bin.
✓ The rules that I can remember are donated in the area which is not a bin.
The subject 'rule' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural, causing a singular and plural mismatch. Changing 'rule' to 'rules' matches the plural verb 'are'.
× The rule that I can remember are donated in the area which is not a bin.
✓ The rules that I can remember are discarded in the area which is not a bin.
The verb 'donated' is incorrectly used with 'in' here; the intended meaning is likely 'discarded' or 'thrown away'. Also, 'in the area' is acceptable but 'in the area which is not a bin' is awkward; however, only the verb is corrected as per instructions.
× Don't talk or chat loudly in classroom or don't run in the hallway which I feel is very good rules.
✓ Don't talk or chat loudly in the classroom or don't run in the hallway, which I feel are very good rules.
The phrase 'very good rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'in classroom' should be 'in the classroom' but only plural issue is corrected here.
× The reason why I don't agree with this statement because I think more rules makes student become more stressed and I think some rules is not that important.
✓ The reason why I don't agree with this statement is because I think more rules make students become more stressed and I think some rules are not that important.
'More rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'more rules'. Also, 'some rules is' should be 'some rules are' to match plural subject and verb.
× They always prepare for the materials and what they will teach in the class beforehand.
✓ They always prepare the materials and what they will teach in the class beforehand.
The verb 'prepare' does not require the preposition 'for' when followed directly by the object 'the materials'. Removing 'for' corrects the preposition usage.
× Personally, I think I prefer fewer rules to more rules because I think currently some of rules in my schools are quite illogical and too strict.
✓ Personally, I think I prefer fewer rules to more rules because I think currently some of the rules in my school are quite illogical and too strict.
The phrase 'some of rules' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'rules'. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' to refer to the speaker's school. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.
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