Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, complete your sentences fully to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, there were several rules at my school. For example, students had to wear uniforms and submit their homework on time. Additionally, there were restrictions on using mobile phones during class.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has confusing sentences. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases and explain your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe more rules can help students become more disciplined. For instance, when students follow rules, they learn responsibility, which benefits them in the future. However, rules should not be too strict to avoid pressure.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and check your sentence structure. Also, avoid confusing phrases and focus on giving specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers. For example, my recent bioinformatics teacher at university is very committed. He encourages students to ask questions and always tries his best to help us understand difficult topics.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, check your sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: I think there should be a balanced number of rules at school. If there are too few rules, students may become undisciplined and cause chaos. However, too many rules can make students feel pressured, so a balance is important.

× Let me give you some examples like students must wear uniform and student must not delay their homework.

✓ Let me give you some examples like students must wear uniforms and students must not delay their homework.

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing worn by multiple students. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject referring to multiple students.

× They need to submitted their homework within the within the allocated time.

✓ They need to submit their homework within the allocated time.

The verb 'submitted' is incorrectly used after 'need to'. After 'need to', the base form of the verb 'submit' should be used, not the past participle 'submitted'.

× Moreover, they had some restrictions on.

✓ Moreover, they had some restrictions.

The sentence ends abruptly with the preposition 'on' without an object, making it incomplete. Removing 'on' completes the sentence properly.

× While for not breaking the rules, they're usually one in the school.

✓ Usually, students do not break the rules in school.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. Rephrasing it to a clear and grammatically correct sentence improves understanding.

× Students do not break the rules because of the fear of punishment but later did.

✓ Students do not break the rules because of the fear of punishment but later they do.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not break' with past tense 'did' incorrectly. To maintain consistency, 'did' should be changed to 'do' or the sentence rephrased.

× Yes, I had many right now.

✓ Yes, I have many right now.

The phrase 'right now' indicates present time, so the verb should be in present tense 'have' instead of past tense 'had'.

× I remember my recent bi bioinformatics teacher from my university.

✓ I remember my recent bioinformatics teacher from my university.

The phrase 'bi bioinformatics' seems to be a typographical error. Correcting it to 'bioinformatics' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× He is really dedicated and he sometimes gets offended when students do not ask questions even when he does not understand the topic and he tries his best to make their students understand.

✓ He is really dedicated and sometimes gets offended when students do not ask questions even when they do not understand the topic, and he tries his best to help his students understand.

The sentence has tense and pronoun agreement issues. 'He does not understand' should be 'they do not understand' referring to students. Also, 'their students' should be 'his students' to match the subject 'he'.

× If there are a few too late, then the students will not learn to be disciplined and there will there will be many chaos in the classroom.

✓ If there are too few rules, then the students will not learn to be disciplined and there will be much chaos in the classroom.

The phrase 'a few too late' is incorrect; it should be 'too few rules'. Also, 'many chaos' is incorrect because 'chaos' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'much'.

× But again, if there are a lot of rules, the students will not will feel pressured to follow them.

✓ But again, if there are a lot of rules, the students will feel pressured to follow them.

The phrase 'will not will feel' is incorrect. It should be 'will feel' to express the future tense correctly.