Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'cut our needs' which should be 'cut our nails'. Also, avoid redundancy and try to make your sentences more natural and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we must wear a clean and proper uniform, keep our nails trimmed, and wear a white ribbon neatly. Additionally, students are expected to maintain silence in the school premises.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use correct vocabulary like 'personal hygiene' instead of 'personal housing'.

Ejemplo: It depends on the type of rules. If the rules encourage good habits like keeping uniforms clean and maintaining personal hygiene, they can benefit students' health and discipline.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'helps students in their walk'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use simple, correct sentences. Avoid unnecessary details and focus on answering the question directly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had a dedicated teacher who supports students not only academically but also emotionally. She helps us with our studies and cares about our mental health.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'the toughest 1'.

Ejemplo: I prefer having reasonable rules at school. If the rules are too strict, it becomes difficult for students to follow them. Therefore, rules should focus on protecting students' basic rights and health.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammar errors and awkward phrases like 'teach them listen'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had a strict teacher. Sometimes, students misbehave and do not follow the rules, so teachers need to be strict to maintain discipline in the school.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammar mistakes and awkward phrases like 'prefer to walk in a school'. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your reasons.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because children might cause problems. I prefer schools that have some rules to maintain order and discipline.

× I think in every schools there are different rules and regulation for the students.

✓ I think in every school there are different rules and regulations for the students.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' because 'every' is used with singular nouns. Also, 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to match 'rules' and because multiple rules are implied.

× Like in my school we should have to wear a proper uniform and that should be cleaned and we should cut our needs.

✓ Like in my school, we have to wear a proper uniform that should be clean and we should cut our nails.

The phrase 'should have to' is incorrect; 'have to' alone expresses obligation. 'That should be cleaned' is better as 'that should be clean' to describe the uniform's state. 'Cut our needs' is incorrect; it should be 'cut our nails'.

× The the ribbon should be white and tidy.

✓ The ribbon should be white and tidy.

There is a repeated word 'The the' which is a typographical error. Also, 'tidy' is acceptable here describing the ribbon's neatness.

× No noise in school.

✓ There should be no noise in school.

The sentence lacks a verb and subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'There should be' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× It is based on what kind of rules are they settled for the students?

✓ It depends on what kind of rules are set for the students.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb usage. 'Depends on' is the correct phrase, and 'are they settled' should be 'are set'.

× Like if it is we, our uniforms will be cleaned and our nails will be tidy.

✓ Like if it is us, our uniforms will be clean and our nails will be tidy.

The pronoun 'we' should be 'us' as the object of the preposition 'if it is'. Also, 'will be cleaned' is better as 'will be clean' to describe the state.

× It goes to our personal housing which brings many benefits in children health.

✓ It relates to our personal hygiene which brings many benefits to children's health.

'Personal housing' is incorrect; the intended word is 'personal hygiene'. Also, 'in children health' should be 'to children's health'.

× Yes, I think in every school there is one dedicated teacher who helps students in their walk, in their home walks and how to deal with their mental health and which helps in proper learning of the students, not the teacher who only wants salaries.

✓ Yes, I think in every school there is one dedicated teacher who helps students with their work, their homework, and how to deal with their mental health, which helps in the proper learning of the students, not the teacher who only wants a salary.

'Walk' should be 'work', 'home walks' should be 'homework'. 'Salaries' should be singular 'salary' as it refers to the teacher's pay. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.

× I think it is based on what kind of rules they settle for the students.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of rules they set for the students.

'It is based on' is better expressed as 'it depends on'. 'Settle' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'set'.

× Like if they get more tough rules for students, it is hard for students to follow.

✓ Like if they have tougher rules for students, it is hard for students to follow.

'More tough' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'tougher'. Also, 'get' is better replaced with 'have' in this context.

× So the rules will be for their basic rights and for their basic health, not the toughest 1.

✓ So the rules will be for their basic rights and for their basic health, not the toughest one.

The number '1' should be written as the word 'one' in formal writing.

× So teachers have to be strict sometime to teach them listen.

✓ So teachers have to be strict sometimes to teach them to listen.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'teach them listen' is incorrect; it should be 'teach them to listen'.

× Not really, because children can cause a lot of trouble if there is no rules in school.

✓ Not really, because children can cause a lot of trouble if there are no rules in school.

'There is no rules' is incorrect; 'rules' is plural, so it should be 'there are no rules'.

× So I prefer to walk in a school where there is some rules rather than no rules in a school.

✓ So I prefer to study in a school where there are some rules rather than no rules in a school.

'Walk in a school' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'study in a school'. Also, 'there is some rules' should be 'there are some rules' because 'rules' is plural.