Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Përmirësoni rrjedhshmërinë dhe qartësinë duke shmangur përsëritjet dhe fjalët e panevojshme si 'umm' dhe 'uh'. Përgjigjuni drejtpërdrejt dhe përdorni lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më koherente.

Ejemplo: Yes, my school has several rules that students must follow. For example, punctuality is important, so students should arrive to class on time. These rules help maintain order and create a good learning environment.

Sugerencia: Përdorni fjalë më të sakta dhe shmangni përsëritjet. Jepni arsye specifike dhe përdorni lidhëza për të lidhur idetë në mënyrë më të qartë.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because rules provide structure and discipline. For instance, clear rules can help students focus better and respect each other, which improves the overall learning experience.

Sugerencia: Përmirësoni strukturën duke shmangur përsëritjet dhe duke përdorur lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më të rrjedhshme. Përshkruani më shumë veprime specifike të mësuesit për të treguar përkushtimin e tij.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher at university who was also a doctor. He was older than other professors and always arrived early and stayed late to help students. His commitment inspired me to work harder.

Sugerencia: Shmangni fjalët e panevojshme dhe përsëritjet si 'uh' dhe 'umm'. Përdorni lidhëza për të lidhur idetë dhe jepni arsye të qarta për preferencën tuaj.

Ejemplo: When I was a student, I preferred fewer rules because they felt restrictive. However, now I understand that more rules are necessary in schools and society to maintain order and help people work together effectively.

Sugerencia: Përmirësoni qartësinë dhe rrjedhshmërinë duke përdorur fjalë më të sakta dhe duke shmangur fraza të paqarta. Përdorni lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më koherente.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a strict professor at university who strictly enforced rules. She especially disliked students being late and did not tolerate tardiness, which encouraged us to be punctual.

Sugerencia: Shmangni përsëritjet dhe fjalët e panevojshme. Përmirësoni strukturën e përgjigjes dhe përdorni lidhëza për të shpjeguar arsyet tuaja në mënyrë më të qartë.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because children today can be difficult to manage. Even with rules, it is challenging, so without them, it would be almost impossible to maintain order.

× I did. In fact, in university I had a teacher that he was a doctor.

✓ I did. In fact, in university I had a teacher who was a doctor.

The pronoun 'that he' is incorrect here; 'who' should be used to refer to people. Using 'who' correctly connects the clause to the noun 'teacher'. Suggestion: Use 'who' instead of 'that he' when referring to people.

× I believe every academic institution works based on rules that, uh, not only students should obliged to umm, even in my school there were umm, different rules.

✓ I believe every academic institution works based on rules that not only students should be obliged to follow; even in my school, there were different rules.

The phrase 'students should obliged to' is incorrect; it should be 'students should be obliged to'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and missing 'be' before 'obliged'. Suggestion: Use 'should be obliged to' to correctly form the passive modal verb structure.

× Some of them, uh, might include the fact that you should come to class in time.

✓ Some of them might include the fact that you should come to class on time.

The correct preposition with 'come to class' regarding punctuality is 'on time', not 'in time'. Suggestion: Use 'on time' to indicate punctuality.

× He was quite older in age in comparison to other professors and he was one of the most dedicated doctors and professors I'd ever seen.

✓ He was quite old in age compared to other professors and he was one of the most dedicated doctors and professors I'd ever seen.

The phrase 'quite older' is incorrect; 'older' is comparative and should not be preceded by 'quite'. Use 'quite old' or 'older' alone. Suggestion: Use 'quite old' or simply 'older' without 'quite'.

× We had one teacher, she was a professor and I wouldn't say she was very strict, she just obliged by the rules.

✓ We had one teacher; she was a professor and I wouldn't say she was very strict, she just abided by the rules.

The phrase 'she just obliged by the rules' is incorrect. The verb 'oblige' is not used this way. The correct verb is 'abide by' meaning to follow rules. Suggestion: Use 'abide by the rules' to express following rules.

× I believe that yes, we do need more roles, uh, in school and society, uh, to, to work.

✓ I believe that yes, we do need more rules in school and society to work.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'rules'. 'Roles' means parts or functions, while 'rules' means regulations. Suggestion: Use 'rules' when referring to regulations or guidelines.