Rules— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yes, ask any institution that are rules. Umm, I'm talking about my university for example, one of the main rules is that you cannot smoke in the campus. That is because, umm, the smoke can be damaging for the lungs of the people, uh.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
In my view, there should be a balance between a lot of rules and an absence of rules. The main reason is that if you try to control everything with rules, you will end up charging people with a lot of instructions that are not clear.
Examinador
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Candidato
No, I have had normal teachers. They are dedicated, but not so much because I think that sometimes teachers are overcharged with responsibilities. But I have had passionate teachers. For example, there was this teacher at my school that I loved her.
Examinador
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Candidato
I prefer to have few rules, but that they are very clear. I I think that an excessive use of rules can lead to a lack of awareness of the whole set of existing.
Examinador
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Candidato
Yes. When I was in a Catholic school, I had a lot of strict teachers. They didn't let us to paint our nails or to leave a room without saying goodbye. And there are a lot of examples, but they were trying to control a lot of our behavior.
Examinador
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Candidato
I would like it because I think that there there should be rules that shape the behavior of students and also of teachers. So I would like to work as a teacher, but in a setting that has the necessary amount of control.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta debería ser más clara y directa. Evita muletillas como "umm" y "uh" y mejora la estructura para que sea más natural y efectiva. Además, usa conectores para enlazar ideas y proporciona detalles específicos sin redundancia.
Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For example, smoking is prohibited on campus because it can harm people's lungs. This rule helps maintain a healthy environment for everyone.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta es buena, pero podrías mejorar la coherencia usando conectores y explicando con más detalle por qué un exceso de reglas puede ser negativo. Evita frases confusas y sé más específico.
Ejemplo: I believe there should be a balance between having many rules and having none. Too many rules can overwhelm students and cause confusion because the instructions might not be clear.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta necesita ser más organizada y clara. Evita contradicciones y usa conectores para mejorar la fluidez. Además, proporciona un ejemplo concreto y desarrolla un poco más la idea.
Ejemplo: I haven't had very dedicated teachers, but some were passionate. For example, I loved one teacher at my school because she always motivated us to learn.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta es clara, pero podrías mejorar la fluidez y evitar repeticiones. Usa conectores para explicar mejor tus ideas y da ejemplos específicos para apoyar tu opinión.
Ejemplo: I prefer having a few clear rules at school because too many rules can make students ignore them altogether.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta es buena, pero podrías mejorar la estructura y usar conectores para que sea más coherente. Además, evita frases incompletas y desarrolla un poco más tus ejemplos.
Ejemplo: Yes, I had strict teachers at my Catholic school. For instance, they didn't allow us to paint our nails or leave the room without saying goodbye because they wanted to control our behavior.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Tu respuesta es clara, pero podrías mejorar la naturalidad y evitar repeticiones. Usa conectores para explicar mejor tu opinión y da ejemplos para hacerla más concreta.
Ejemplo: I would like to work as a teacher in a school with some rules because they help guide the behavior of both students and teachers. However, the rules should not be too strict.
Gramática
× Yes, ask any institution that are rules.
✓ Yes, ask any institution that has rules.
The subject 'institution' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'are' to agree in number.
× one of the main rules is that you cannot smoke in the campus.
✓ one of the main rules is that you cannot smoke on the campus.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'campus' is 'on'.
× They didn't let us to paint our nails or to leave a room without saying goodbye.
✓ They didn't let us paint our nails or leave a room without saying goodbye.
After 'let', the base form of the verb is used without 'to'. Including 'to' is incorrect.
× there was this teacher at my school that I loved her.
✓ there was this teacher at my school that I loved.
The relative clause already includes the object 'that', so adding 'her' is redundant and incorrect.
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