Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên dùng các liên từ để nối các ý và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "Student don't. Don't be allowed...", bạn có thể nói "Students are not allowed to arrive late or be impolite to teachers."

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every Monday and Friday. Also, they are not allowed to arrive late or be impolite to teachers.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lặp từ như "their own its own". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói "However, if the rules are too strict, students might feel scared."

Ejemplo: It's a complicated question. I believe every school needs its own regulations to ensure quality education. However, if the rules are too strict, students might feel scared and uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và dùng thì đúng, ví dụ "One of my best memories is my French teacher who was really dedicated to her career and always smiled."

Ejemplo: During my school life, I met many teachers, and I even became one myself. One of my best memories is of my French teacher, who was very dedicated to her career and always smiled at students.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "Uh" và sửa lỗi nhỏ như "more clear" thành "clearer". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer schools to have clear and fair rules because they help create a positive learning environment. For example, when students understand the rules, they can focus better on their studies and feel more connected to the school. Therefore, having clearer rules benefits both students and teachers.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ "teachers are worth a very strict" không đúng, nên là "my French teacher was very strict and clear." Ngoài ra, hãy dùng thì đúng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, my French teacher was very strict and clear. Thanks to her, we have all become successful people today. She was one of the best teachers I have ever known.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "uh" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "such a environment" thành "such an environment". Ngoài ra, câu cuối "it's the same size for the teacher" không rõ nghĩa, bạn nên nói rõ hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I don't believe people can work well in a rule-free school environment. Students might do whatever they want without understanding the consequences, and the same applies to teachers.

× Student don't.

✓ Students don't.

The subject 'Student' is singular, but the verb 'don't' is plural. The correct plural form is 'Students don't.' This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Don't be allowed to go too late and be impolite to the teachers.

✓ They are not allowed to stay out too late and be impolite to the teachers.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Don't be allowed' which is not a proper modal verb construction. The correct form is 'They are not allowed' to express prohibition. This is a modal verb usage error.

× every school needs their own its own regulations to assure the quality of education

✓ every school needs its own regulations to assure the quality of education

The phrase 'their own its own' is redundant and incorrect. Since 'every school' is singular, the possessive pronoun should be singular 'its'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× the student will be scared.

✓ the students will be scared.

The subject refers to students in general, so the plural form 'students' should be used instead of singular 'student'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I my best memories is my French teacher who's really dedicated for her career and for students who was always smile smiling.

✓ My best memory is my French teacher who is really dedicated to her career and to students and who is always smiling.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and structure, including 'I my best memories is' and 'who was always smile smiling'. The corrected sentence fixes the structure and verb forms. This is a sentence structure error.

× who's really dedicated for her career and for students

✓ who's really dedicated to her career and to students

The correct preposition after 'dedicated' is 'to', not 'for'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× my French teachers are worth a very strict and clear teacher.

✓ my French teacher is a very strict and clear teacher.

The subject should be singular 'teacher' to match the singular verb 'is' and article 'a'. 'Teachers are worth' is incorrect here. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Thanks to her we all become successful person today.

✓ Thanks to her we all have become successful people today.

'Person' should be plural 'people' to match 'we all'. Also, the tense should be present perfect 'have become'. This is a singular and plural issue and past tense issue.

× She was one of the best teacher I have ever known.

✓ She was one of the best teachers I have ever known.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'one of the best' refers to a group. This is a singular and plural issue.

× No, I don't believe that people can work at such a environment in a rule free school.

✓ No, I don't believe that people can work in such an environment in a rule-free school.

The correct preposition is 'in' not 'at' for 'environment'. Also, 'an' is needed before vowel sound 'environment'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and article error.

× in a rule free school.

✓ in a rule-free school.

'Rule-free' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. This is an article and adjective usage issue.

× People, uh, students may do whatever they want without knowing about the consequences, and it's the same size for the teacher.

✓ People, uh, students may do whatever they want without knowing about the consequences, and it's the same for the teacher.

The phrase 'the same size' is incorrect; it should be 'the same'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns or expressions.