Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear, specific details and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, mention specific rules and explain their purpose briefly.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms every day and greet teachers in the morning. Additionally, there are designated break times when students can rest or have snacks.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows some good ideas but is filled with hesitations and unclear phrasing. Try to speak more confidently and use linking words to organize your points. Provide specific reasons why more rules could be beneficial.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they promote unity and teach proper behaviour. Moreover, rules help maintain discipline, which creates a better learning environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words and avoid filler words. Be specific about what made the teacher dedicated.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated math teacher during my school years. She was passionate about her subject and always included practical examples in her lessons. She also guided me personally and gave useful advice to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer having more rules at school because they teach students discipline and help them build good relationships with their peers. Furthermore, following rules contributes to creating a better society.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Avoid irrelevant information and focus on answering the question directly. Use correct grammar and provide specific examples of the teacher's strictness and its effects.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very strict computer teacher at school. She insisted that we attend every class and complete our assignments on time. Because of her strictness, most students, including me, achieved good marks.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good points but is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules. Rules are important because they help students learn respect for teachers and classmates. Therefore, having rules is necessary for a positive learning environment.

× people have to follow many regulations and discipline in the schools like they have to wear uniform as a daily basis

✓ people have to follow many regulations and discipline in the schools like they have to wear a uniform on a daily basis

The phrase 'wear uniform as a daily basis' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' for 'on a daily basis', and 'a uniform' requires the indefinite article 'a' because 'uniform' is a countable noun here.

× they also have to wish the schools at that time

✓ they also have to greet the school at that time

The verb 'wish' is incorrectly used with 'the schools'. The intended meaning is likely to greet or show respect, so 'greet the school' is more appropriate. Also, 'schools' should be singular if referring to the institution.

× there are also a number of roads like break on that time, they can take break on exit time so

✓ there are also a number of rules like break at that time; they can take a break at exit time

The word 'roads' is incorrect; it should be 'rules'. The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'that time' and 'exit time'; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'take break' needs an article: 'take a break'.

× she always want to teach student while doing the practical

✓ she always wants to teach students while doing practicals

The verb 'want' needs to be in third person singular form 'wants'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Doing the practical' is better expressed as 'doing practicals' without 'the'.

× she always want to teach student while doing the practical

✓ she always wants to teach students while doing practicals

The subject 'she' requires the verb to be in third person singular form 'wants' instead of 'want'.

× she always want to teach student while doing the practical

✓ she always wants to teach students while doing practicals

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because the teacher teaches multiple students. Also, 'practical' should be plural 'practicals' to refer to practical lessons.

× she always, uh, guide me, uh, give me a good suggestion about uh, uh, our subject

✓ she always, uh, guides me, uh, gives me good suggestions about, uh, uh, our subject

The verbs 'guide' and 'give' need to be in third person singular form 'guides' and 'gives' to agree with 'she'. 'Suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' as it is likely more than one.

× she always, uh, guide me, uh, give me a good suggestion about uh, uh, our subject

✓ she always, uh, guides me, uh, gives me a good suggestion about, uh, uh, our subject

The verbs 'guide' and 'give' must be conjugated to third person singular 'guides' and 'gives' to agree with the subject 'she'.

× models, uh, help the, uh, students to know about the, uh, discipline and know about how to, uh, unite with their friends

✓ rules, uh, help the, uh, students to know about, uh, discipline and know how to, uh, unite with their friends

The word 'models' is incorrect; it should be 'rules'. The phrase 'know about how to unite' is better as 'know how to unite' without 'about'.

× they also, uh, learn the many things by having, uh, more rules

✓ they also, uh, learn many things by having, uh, more rules

The phrase 'the many things' is incorrect; 'many things' without 'the' is the correct quantifier usage here.

× there is my computer teacher and she is very strict but I think there is one reason behind her sickness

✓ there was my computer teacher and she was very strict but I think there was one reason behind her strictness

The phrase 'behind her sickness' is incorrect; it should be 'behind her strictness' to explain the reason for her behaviour. Also, tense adjusted to past to match context.

× Like she want everyone have a delicate about their study and anyone don't have miss any class and complete their work at time

✓ She wants everyone to be dedicated to their studies and no one to miss any class and to complete their work on time

The verb 'want' needs third person singular 'wants'. 'Delicate' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'dedicated'. The phrase 'anyone don't have miss' is ungrammatical; it should be 'no one to miss'. 'At time' should be 'on time'.

× Like she want everyone have a delicate about their study

✓ Like she wants everyone to be dedicated to their studies

The verb 'want' must be 'wants' to agree with 'she'. Also, the phrase needs 'to be' before 'dedicated'.

× she want everyone have a delicate about their study

✓ she wants everyone to be dedicated to their studies

The word 'delicate' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'dedicated'.

× anyone don't have miss any class and complete their work at time

✓ no one misses any class and completes their work on time

The phrase 'anyone don't have miss' is incorrect. It should be 'no one misses' to express the negative correctly. Also, 'at time' should be 'on time'.

× everyone get good marks in the computer because

✓ everyone gets good marks in computer because

The verb 'get' should be 'gets' for third person singular agreement with 'everyone'. The article 'the' before 'computer' is unnecessary here.

× No, I don't like to work as a teacher and there is no role because I think the role is making for the better of the students

✓ No, I don't like to work as a teacher in a school without rules because I think rules are made for the betterment of the students

The word 'role' is incorrectly used instead of 'rule'. The phrase 'making for the better' is incorrect; it should be 'made for the betterment'.

× So I think it's a necessary to have our rules in the school because due to the rules, students can learn many things like they know how to respect their holders, how to respect their classmates

✓ So I think it's necessary to have rules in the school because, due to the rules, students can learn many things like how to respect their elders and their classmates

The phrase 'it's a necessary' is incorrect; it should be 'it's necessary'. The word 'holders' is incorrect; the correct word is 'elders' or 'teachers' depending on context.